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With so many amazing entries already pouring in I couldn't help but feel a bit out of the loop. Well, there's a remedy for everything. My first entry is a Vignette.

A Crown Knight finds himself outmatched by a trio of primate invaders.

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Feedback is appreciated.

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Very nice work! I wont rave on about all the cool things as you want critique :classic: The green and light blue flooring doesn't do much for the overall moc. Also the use of the occasional blue cylinder detracts from the primary colours a little. Also the tan columns stick out a little too much with the grey/sand green motif.

Just my thoughts, I still really like this moc a lot, hope this helps.

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Very nice! Especially for a first venture into a new scale/style... also nice to see a fresh concept employed.

God Bless,

Nathan

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Very nice work! I wont rave on about all the cool things as you want critique :classic: The green and light blue flooring doesn't do much for the overall moc. Also the use of the occasional blue cylinder detracts from the primary colours a little. Also the tan columns stick out a little too much with the grey/sand green motif.

Just my thoughts, I still really like this moc a lot, hope this helps.

Thank you for the critique. I'm always interested in constructive criticism and yours was very helpful. I intend to consider some of the things you said when constructing the second great hall in my castle. I agree that the sand green and blue don't necessarily go together particularly well, so I'll try to avoid the combination in the future. Building vignettes is fairly new to me so your comments were very useful. The cylinders on the back wall are actually a repeating pattern of dark/light blue. I suspect that the effect is diminished by the crowded nature of the vignette. Perhaps the pattern should have been sand green/tan instead.

Hopefully my next work turns out a bit better :classic: .

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Ha ha! :laugh: Poor Knight. The Monkies got the better of him. I really like your design and how all the elements draw your eyes up. Plus, the stacked furniture is great. Exacty how I would imagine how an angry knight would try to get at the Monkies on the chandelier. Grab whatever he could in the room and stack it up.

:thumbup: just for the Monkies.

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