Bob Posted October 30, 2008 Posted October 30, 2008 Well. I promised a story and with some nagging (cough) Lego12 (cough). Without further ado, I present Mystery Town: __________________________________________________________________________ It is morning, most of the town is asleep. The only sounds are the garbage truck going around. 3 early risers are getting there fruits. Ida: Hello John! How are you this morning. John: Howdy Ida, buyin' some apples Ida: You know I bake those apple pies...Pick up some of those apples for me Josh Josh: Those pies are going to be the death of me... If only they would look across the street and notice someone was taking careful aim with a pistol. BANG, BANG, BANG Several shots rang out, The shots probably could have been heard for miles. Ida: OH MY GOD!! HELP HELP Narrowly missing Ida, the killer ran off. It could have been heard from the harbor. It could have been heard from the zoo. It was heard from the early awakened army base. Soon, a crowd of people assembled at the scene. News Anchor: What can you tell us about the murders? Swat Member: As of now, we can't tell you, You'll have to wait for the next chapter Later That Day Mark: Come on Sarah, everyones at Makeout Ruins! Sarah: I don't know about this... Mark: Okay, no one "does" it here, but still.. Sarah: Alright... Sarah: Lets go somewhere alittle more hidden (giggles) Mark: Now were talkin! Sarah: Okay... Mark: LOOK! IT'S A SKELETON! Sarah: OH MY GOD! Mark: Does this mean were not going to have sex...? ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- And there you have it. Comments, questions, anything else? Quote
Lego12 Posted October 30, 2008 Posted October 30, 2008 Very good comic, Bob! Could you show us 2 or 3 pics of the island so we can see where everything is? Quote
Bob Posted October 30, 2008 Author Posted October 30, 2008 (edited) There you go. Thats a view from a ferry. You cant see the army base to much though. I might take some more pictures when the light comes back though. Expect Chapter One up tommorow. The rest will be a weekly. Some main characters: Ida Mark Sarah News Anchor Old Man Pete (The fisherman) Swat Team Commander (He isnt in the preview) There are many more however.. Edited October 30, 2008 by Bob the Construction Man Quote
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