Dark Sword Ragnarok Posted October 17, 2008 Posted October 17, 2008 (edited) Hey guys, DSR here! I've been gearing up for a big comic, but unfortunately, this is only the prequel. The real big one will be up in the next week or so with any luck. Been busy with school and Band. Have a competition Saturday, and we've just barely finished learning our street percussion song. Anyway, on to the comic. This is only a taste of this comic, I'll try to get the rest up soon. It's late and I've got a full schedule the next 2 days. By the way, ACES stands for Advanced Clone Engineer Squad. They're comprised of five members currently, one of them is Commander Kraine. They are master fixers and builders, and have quite an arsenal. Canyon Outpost, Tatooine Home of the ACES Advisor: Jack will be there soon. You have your orders. Defend that outpost until he arrives! Kraine: Understood, advisor. Kraine out. Kraine: You two, get to the central canyon hangar, and wait for the Wolfen. Both: Understood. Kraine: Looks like a good time to test out the heavy weapons. Kraine: Heh, this should be interesting... Wish I could post more right now, but I need sleep for school tomorrow. We have to march for the homecoming game. Freakin' Homecoming. Who even goes to those anymore? Hope you guys liked this taste of whats to come. I'll try and get more up in my Engineering class tomorrow, if we're not doing much. DSR EDIT: Wow, I can't believe it's already the end of December. Im sorry, I promised this would be updated within a week, but its been 2 months. Well, here's the next installment: Clone: Go go go! Open fire! Eat hot plasma ya bucket of bolts! Go for the leader! Take out that SBD! Kraine: Time to work this thing! Wait, wha- Clone: I got him guys! Watch out! Oh cra- Agh! Kraine: Damn shinies! Never know what they're doing! Target that SbD before he rips us apart with that STAP! Jack: Raaagh! Taste the heat of my blade droids! Kraine: Jack! Finally, your just in time! Jack: Yeah! Take that! Hah! Yeah! Haha, it feels good to get into the heat of battle! Kraine: Oh crap. Jack: What? Oh crap! (whoosh) Clone1: Where'd he go? Clone2: Did he just TELEPORT? Kraine: I think so, just take out that tank! Kraine: Look out for those turrets! Clone: Agh, im hit! Help! Kraine: Hold on! Im sure Jack's coming back! Jack: Hya! Droid Pilot: Uh Oh- (Slice) Haha, take that ya bucket of scrapmetal! Hah! Kraine: Well perfect, now what do we do with it? Jack: Hmm.... Jack: How's that? Kraine: Uh, better. Jack: Lets head inside. Kraine: Holo message coming through, standing by to recieve. Advisor: Good work holding them off Commander Kraine. I see General Sisco has arrived safely. Jack: That I have. And I whooped some metal megablocks, I might add. Advisor: Good to hear. General, there is someone waiting to see you in the main Hangar with the Wolfen. I suggest you go and meet them right away. Jack: Very well. I will see to it immediately. Advisor: Excellent. I will pass the news of your arrival on to the Jedi Council. Advisor out. (End transmission.) Jack: Alright, lets see who's waiting for me. Oh, and can you have your team start the repairs on the Wolfen? Getting here was living hell, it's pretty thrashed. Kraine: Of course, sir. My team will get it running better then new. Jsck: I've heard good things about your team. Im sure they will do excellent repairs. Now, lets get to the hangar. No time to lose, they could strike again at any moment. TO BE CONTINUED I won't make any promises this time around, but I do plan on continuing this series. BTW, all these pictures were taken in October, so apologies if their somewhat crappy. Anyway, I hope you've enjoyed it so far! C&C welcome as always. DSR Edited December 23, 2008 by Dark Sword Ragnarok Quote
Lt. Col. Thok Posted October 17, 2008 Posted October 17, 2008 Excellent, I'm looking forward to the next installments. Quote
Guss Posted October 17, 2008 Posted October 17, 2008 nice ^^ that's a heavy heavy weapon Oo laser gatling ? ^^ Quote
Zorro Posted October 17, 2008 Posted October 17, 2008 Keep 'em coming, and preferrably into larger sizes . I like the hologram and "heavy weapon" you've made. Quote
DarthPineapple Posted October 17, 2008 Posted October 17, 2008 Looks great! I think it would be cool to add some small text balloons, what do you think? Quote
Dark Sword Ragnarok Posted October 17, 2008 Author Posted October 17, 2008 Excellent, I'm looking forward to the next installments. Thanks, Thok! I can't wait either. nice ^^ that's a heavy heavy weapon Oo laser gatling ? ^^ Thanks. It is a gatling gun, yes. Mmmmmm, Gatling! Keep 'em coming, and preferrably into larger sizes .I like the hologram and "heavy weapon" you've made. Ah well, the pics are clearest at tis size and the site doesn't have to kick in the auto resize. Thanks about the hologram, though! I thought it was retty good when I got the idea. Looks great! I think it would be cool to add some small text balloons, what do you think? Maybe, I probably could do text with a program I have, but it would be hard to fit in all the dialouge for one shot, well, on the shot, you know what I mean? Great suggestion, though, I may try it out soon. DSR Quote
Legoking Posted October 17, 2008 Posted October 17, 2008 (edited) I like your comic. But why did you scribble on one of your clones? I think you ruined it. Edited October 18, 2008 by LegoKing Quote
Clonecommando007 Posted October 17, 2008 Posted October 17, 2008 Nice! It's short, and nice, but it's definantly missing a few things. -Could be longer -Clones could be better detailed, not neccessary but it really adds to the comic -Text bubbles are your friend -More to it, there wasn't really that much of a plot or fighting But a neat job! If you'd really like some inspiration on comics, check out the CABG Clone Army Creations. There are always comics in there, lots of members do them. Quote
Dark Sword Ragnarok Posted October 17, 2008 Author Posted October 17, 2008 I like your comic. But whyt did you scribble on one of your clones? I think you ruined it. Thanks, but what do you mean scribble? I use permanent marker, and very carefully. Are you talking about 214, or another clone? If it's 214, I know I ruined his helmet. It's completely thrashed. I used a sharp object to take off some ink that I got on the front by accident. Besides, I have 2 other Pilot helmets, so no worries about that (as long as I can find them again). Nice! It's short, and nice, but it's definantly missing a few things.-Could be longer -Clones could be better detailed, not neccessary but it really adds to the comic -Text bubbles are your friend -More to it, there wasn't really that much of a plot or fighting But a neat job! If you'd really like some inspiration on comics, check out the CABG Clone Army Creations. There are always comics in there, lots of members do them. As I said before, this is the beggining. I havent had time to do all of it yet, but I will try to get the rest up sunday. I have been going all day, and this will probably be the only time I'll have to check Eurobricks until sunday. Guess you'll just have to wait, but that's half the fun! DSR Quote
Legoking Posted October 18, 2008 Posted October 18, 2008 I would use acrylic paint. That is what I use. Take a look at mine. If you want, I can tell you how I made them and can walk you through the process. My custom clone troopers LegoKing Quote
Dark Sword Ragnarok Posted October 19, 2008 Author Posted October 19, 2008 I would use acrylic paint. That is what I use. Take a look at mine. If you want, I can tell you how I made them and can walk you through the process.My custom clone troopers LegoKing Well, I think that the permanent marker I've used has done me well. I only am doing detailing, I don't want to do full body painting. Thanks for the suggestion, though, Legoking! If I ever want do do something like this, I'll be sure to hit you up! Rest will be up soon, maybe not today, but soon. So tired from the band review yesterday. DSR Quote
Dark Sword Ragnarok Posted December 23, 2008 Author Posted December 23, 2008 Sorry to double post, but the first post has been up with the rest of the comic. I hope you enjoy it, even if it is 2 months late. I apologize for procrastinating for so long. Blame life . DSR Quote
Skipper 24 Posted December 23, 2008 Posted December 23, 2008 I am loving your comics keep it up . I liked the droids tank quite a bit in this comic as it was a nice original idea and shape. Quote
Snake...SNAKE...SNAAAAKE?! Posted December 23, 2008 Posted December 23, 2008 I completely forgot about this! Quote
Tim Bit Posted December 23, 2008 Posted December 23, 2008 That was great do you plan on making another. I hope so. That tank was great and all the weapons that you made from official parts. Can't wait to see the next. Quote
Dark Sword Ragnarok Posted December 23, 2008 Author Posted December 23, 2008 I am loving your comics keep it up . I liked the droids tank quite a bit in this comic as it was a nice original idea and shape. Thanks, the droid tank is actually one of my fave MOC's. It was built entirely from Droid BP peices (well, about ten BPS ) If you want to see more of it check out my Flickr page (link in sig). I completely forgot about this! Haha, so did I. No worries. Hope you enjoyed it. That was great do you plan on making another?I hope so. That tank was great and all the weapons that you made from official parts. Can't wait to see the next. Thanks, yeah, I plan on doing more when I get more free time. The weapons I enjoyed too. Much more figs are coming, I will post them when I finish them up! More weapons coming too. Thanks for all the comments. Keep them coming! DSR Quote
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