Cameron_Talley Posted October 9, 2008 Posted October 9, 2008 This is a great little entry, and your improvements really make it almost perfect. I love the cage design with the chains and wagon wheels--had not seen that before. The SNOT for the deck of the gallows platform and staggering of the brown tiles is perfect. The addition of the executioner really makes the scene--fabulous use of the Ninja headpiece, too (is there a subtle Ninjas vs. Pirates thing here?). The only thing you might considering adding, as others have mentioned, is some detail beneath the gallows. Maybe some horns, or perhaps just a few random piles of bones to suggest victims of hangings gone by... Other than that, I'd say this entry is finished! Quote
Guss Posted October 9, 2008 Posted October 9, 2008 the improvement make it look really better than before! I liked it before, now I it ! Quote
Fat Tony Posted October 14, 2008 Author Posted October 14, 2008 EDIT: I just realized the executioner is Hinkley's sig-fig! How dare you insult Hinkley! I hadn't even noticed. Maybe it's his evil twin... or good twin. (is there a subtle Ninjas vs. Pirates thing here?). Not this time, that was a different contest. ( http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/55670 ) Anyways, it looks like everyone is done commenting and making suggestions on this entry. A big thanks to everyone for the constructive criticism, it helped! I'm going to be editing my first post with my final pictures soon, and then getting to work on another entry, hopefully! Quote
Erdbeereis Posted October 14, 2008 Posted October 14, 2008 That is so much better Fat Tony! It looks like a prize-winner now! Quote
Fat Tony Posted October 14, 2008 Author Posted October 14, 2008 That is so much better Fat Tony!It looks like a prize-winner now! Thanks! I've edited the first post with four NEW pictures of the finished entry. Go back to the first page and check them out! I did it that way since the first picture is going to be used for judging. Now some of the comments don't make much sense (what gray pole?) but they were helpful at the time. Now on to something Medium! Quote
Ye Olde Pirate Posted October 15, 2008 Posted October 15, 2008 Wow, this is so cool. The only improvement I'd suggest, is to add some soldiers. Quote
Zorro Posted October 15, 2008 Posted October 15, 2008 (edited) Tony, the last improvements you've made were . That "blatter stuff" was an awesome idea! Now you are in the running for a prize! Edited October 15, 2008 by zorro3999 Quote
Cameron_Talley Posted October 16, 2008 Posted October 16, 2008 The new addition of the other brick-built birds complete this entry. I think this may be one of the prize contenders for sure! I can't think of any improvements you could make now...it's perfect! Quote
Erdbeereis Posted October 16, 2008 Posted October 16, 2008 The addition of more birds (and lovely ones at that) just makes this entry all the better. Smashing work Fat Tony! Quote
Cpt. Willabee Posted October 16, 2008 Posted October 16, 2008 Thats really intense and yet very good! Nice work! The crows are a nice touch to it! Quote
Dr. X Posted October 17, 2008 Posted October 17, 2008 I love it, especially the crows, pee, and the awesome cage/dead guy. Niceness. Quote
Captain Zuloo Posted October 17, 2008 Posted October 17, 2008 I just noticed the crows pecking at the dead pirate. Eeewwwwww! I almost threw up that is so gruesome! Great job - three thumbs up! Quote
Guss Posted October 17, 2008 Posted October 17, 2008 (edited) Hu ho , you added some crows, and they're awesome ! great job ! and the .. hum yellow liquid.. ^^ on the ground is a nice addition too! Edited October 17, 2008 by Guss Quote
Captain Zuloo Posted October 17, 2008 Posted October 17, 2008 The yellow liquid.. ^^ on the ground is a nice addiction too! Addiction? You are addictid to liquid waste? You need some help Guss... Sorry, I couldn't resist! Quote
Guss Posted October 17, 2008 Posted October 17, 2008 (edited) oups .... *ninja edit* who wrote addiction ? Edited October 17, 2008 by Guss Quote
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