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My opinion:

Beautifull little MOC, I like your vultures and "theme".

Possible improvements:

1) Trees usually are different in the desert, they have no or few branches since branches use loads of liquids (water) and in most deserts there is a shortage of this :laugh: Maybe a palm tree or a cactus-like plant would look better. But this is a minor thingie...

2) Jopiek is right about the blood, if you want something "gore", you could add some pieces of flesh.

3) If you take a pic like this, I think it would be better to lay the plates into the other direction, that would reduce the "stripes" between the plates, since they would be partially hidden/unseen.

But in overall I like it :wink: , keep up the good work.

(this is my new "commenting style")

Edited by zorro3999
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My opinion:

Beautifull little MOC, I like your vultures and "theme".

Possible improvements:

1) Trees usually are different in the desert, they have no or few branches since branches use loads of liquids (water) and in most deserts there is a shortage of this :laugh: Maybe a palm tree or a cactus-like plant would look better. But this is a minor thingie...

2) Jopiek is right about the blood, if you want something "gore", you could add some pieces of flesh.

3) If you take a pic like this, I think it would be better to lay the plates into the other direction, that would reduce the "stripes" between the plates, since they would be partially hidden/unseen.

I think another way to improve the shot is to raise the camera level to get a more 3/4th view.

I would love to see part 2 of this with the lost rider.

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