Joey Lock Posted August 29, 2008 Posted August 29, 2008 (edited) Key: Genreal - Exobuilder Lieutenant - Other guy Soldier 1 - Sitting Soldier 2 - Standing Zen - Orange goggles Cobra - Balaclava Kameleon - Dark red guy The Enemy has begun to move in their Artillery to the Outskirts: Lieutenant: Sir, we have just gotten word the Enemy has moved in on our City. General: Walk with me, explain. Lieutenant: Well sir the Lookout posts in the City edges have seen camps plotting around the Forest. General: Anything we should be worried about at this moment? We have plenty of men on the outskirts. Lieutenant: They have there Artillery blocking our Supply routes. General: Ah, Then we must contact nearby allies and send a distrest call. They must either defeat, distract or slip past the Enemy lines. Lieutenant:Well there are a few routes out to the South Forests. General: Do you know their location? Lieutenant: Yes sir, I have the Map to the City here. It has everything down to the last little flower. General: Very good, we must send out scouts Immediatly. So they sent the Scout bikes out to warn neighbouring cities. Meanwhile, in a nearby camp the enemy Artillery passes a nearby Rebel holdout. But it stops and deploys. Soldier 1: Where are they? Soldier 2: Right behind us... Soldier 1: What?! Soldier 2: Keep your voice down! They will hear us... Soldier 1: They will bloody find us in a minute if we stay here! Zen: Shut up. Cobra, have you found anything? Cobra: Noting to report on. Zen: We have got to move from here before they scan the houses. Cobra: What makes you think they will suceed? We have the best soldiers here. Zen: Can you be sure on that? I dont want to take any chances in losing my men. Cobra: What do you suggest we do? Zen: Im not suggesting anything. Im just stating a fact. Soldier 1: How about we grab the men, and use there costumes? Soldier 2: Have you noticed we are Yellow?! Soldier 1: Oh yeah...Heh... Cobra: Ok then, I have a soldier for the job. Kameleon is our No.1 Spy, He will go and mess with the Controls. Zen: You do realise they have Guns? Cobra: Ahh, but why is he No.1? He has a cloaking device. He can either disguse as them or as the surrondings. Zen: Haha, Good name then. Kameleon sets his cloak and moves out. Zen: Kameleon, according to this blue prints the deactivation code is Y8E9A8H. And, Good luck out there Soldier. Kameleon: I will sir, dont you worry about that. Kameleon begins to type in the Code and tamper with the controls. To be continued... So what do you think? Comments welcome. Edited August 29, 2008 by Joey Lock Quote
Minifig Lecturer Posted August 29, 2008 Posted August 29, 2008 (edited) Well i really HATE fleshies, so I like to see them get whacked! edit: even more than reality TV Edited August 29, 2008 by Calvin Quote
Skipper 24 Posted August 29, 2008 Posted August 29, 2008 This second installment is excellent. I would like to see some new vehicles from you in this fleshies v yellow. I am working on my own right now. (you did say we could make our own in part 1 right?) Quote
Joey Lock Posted August 29, 2008 Author Posted August 29, 2008 (edited) This second installment is excellent. I would like to see some new vehicles from you in this fleshies v yellow. I am working on my own right now. (you did say we could make our own in part 1 right?) Yes, Join in everyone if you would like? But Ill write the Story and add in your Mocs if you would like to send me Pictures of it to post. And a Picture of your Sigfig as a Rebel if you want your Figure in it, since I do not have everyones Sig-Fig! And you could be a Fleshie! But a warning that people may spit at you in the streets. I guess you can just shoot them. EDIT: I forgot to add a picture into the story! Its with the General and Leiutenant. Edited August 29, 2008 by Joey Lock Quote
Manta Posted August 29, 2008 Posted August 29, 2008 Die fleshies, I have a few fleshies, gonna make them badguys eventually tough. Quote
Adam Posted August 30, 2008 Posted August 30, 2008 (edited) Great story, Joey Lock! I've already started my own comic series.... my camera just ran out of battery...... I hope the fact that I'm doing a Fleshie thing to is OK. A sneak preview: Edit: Woops, just saw your last post- looks like this comic thing isn't gonna happen (please!?). But I have some MOCs, and if you give me the story, I could work with that and PM you pics. Edited August 30, 2008 by Adam Quote
ExoBuilder Posted August 30, 2008 Posted August 30, 2008 Mmmm, fleshies! <3 Screw the yellow team, I'll take the fleshies. Quote
Lt. Veers Posted August 30, 2008 Posted August 30, 2008 Mmmm, fleshies! <3 Screw the yellow team, I'll take the fleshies. I couldn't agree more. Quote
Joey Lock Posted August 30, 2008 Author Posted August 30, 2008 I couldn't agree more. Clones! Ahhhhh! Quote
Brick n Brick Posted August 31, 2008 Posted August 31, 2008 Nice work! I'm thinking about making a fleshies vs. yellows myself. It's such a fun concept to play around with. Quote
Joey Lock Posted September 1, 2008 Author Posted September 1, 2008 Nice work! I'm thinking about making a fleshies vs. yellows myself. It's such a fun concept to play around with. If you would like to make your own series I do have a few rules on mine. Well you could make your own series, mabye still using the Fleshie Idea but not exactly the same as mine. Its just I need to still keep my comic Idea....Mine, im sure you understand. Unless your making a MOC to I could add to my story. You can have your Sig-Fig in it as a request although I may not have all of them. Quote
Brick n Brick Posted September 1, 2008 Posted September 1, 2008 Ok, well. I had made 2 trucks to use in mine, and have used. You could feature them in yours aswell, if you wish. Quote
Joey Lock Posted September 2, 2008 Author Posted September 2, 2008 Ok, well. I had made 2 trucks to use in mine, and have used. You could feature them in yours aswell, if you wish. Im fine thanks, I have created my own Troop Transport for my next episode. Ok, who rated my comic Ugly?! Im sad now... Quote
Zepher Posted September 2, 2008 Posted September 2, 2008 I started building a set for my version of this comic today (It's also a enrty for Chris Doyle's Resoenably cleaver contest.) I've had this idea for a while, but it looks like you beat me to it. no mattr, I'll still be building! Nice job! You know what they say, great minds think a-like, so you must have a AWESOME mind Quote
Joey Lock Posted September 2, 2008 Author Posted September 2, 2008 I started building a set for my version of this comic today (It's also a enrty for Chris Doyle's Resoenably cleaver contest.) I've had this idea for a while, but it looks like you beat me to it. no mattr, I'll still be building! Nice job! You know what they say, great minds think a-like, so you must have a AWESOME mind Thanks for the Reply! Im getting angry about 3 People voting it ugly but not explaining why! I shall get to the bottom of this! Quote
Zepher Posted September 2, 2008 Posted September 2, 2008 Heres my version (the beginning) http://www.eurobricks.com/forum/index.php?showtopic=21055 Quote
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