The Angel, The Torn and the corpse

[maiq the liar]

Thousands of years before 6 toa and hundreds of brainwashed matoran landed on the islands of mata nui, the Order of mata nui and the brotherhood of makuta waged war. There were, of course, multiple casualties. this topic focuses on 3.

The Angel and her lover, tourian

There once was a relatively peaceful city hidden deep in a forest that was surrounded by the Ta-Keki mountain range. It took the Brotherhood almost a year to notice this little city, and as such it was the last city they razed on their conquest. The city was discovered, and burned down. all citizens were slaughtered by the makuta, but 2: Angel, and Tourian. Angel was trapped in a maze miles below the city, doomed to wander the maze in search of the one she loved. Tourian, however...His fate was too gruesome to describe. after centuries, but still hundreds of years before mata-nui was inhabited, Angel finally escaped with Tourian's battered and desecrated corpse. there was no other life for miles...

The heart of tourian

After decades of training, Angel had changed. gone were the cannons the brotherhood had replaced her broken arms with...

She had Melted down tourian's bones and crafted them into 2 intricate blades, so she could have revenge for her lover, who had been experimented on, tortured and slowly killed...

...She meant business.

The goodBad? doctor

The BOM member Duality, a man with a split personality (one personality good, one Ussal**** Insane) was the one who had killed tourian. it had been his insane side (who would tear your arm off, club you over the head and eat you the second he even smelled you) who had slaughtered him. His good side wanted nothing to do with the BoM, but his insane side was gaining influence over his body. By the time Angel had gotten to him, his good side was nearly gone. through telepathic messages to angel, he explained his situation and apologized sincerely for what his insane side had done. she did the only thing that made sense, knocking off only one of his heads. needless to say, she got lucky and knocked off the insane head, and hurdled it into the ocean. they went their separate ways.

shortly after, the toa metru and everyone else arrived, which led us to the beginning of the story...

Which side is which?

You should be able to tell by looking at the arms. the good side has a perfectly formed hand, whereas the insane side has a crude claw.

About the MOCs...

They were all built in about the period of a hour or so using the parts i could scrounge up, after 2 cups of my ridiculously strong coffee, which could give even zeus a run for his money...The song i had playing while building was "gangplank galleon" from donkey kong country. wow, my head is spinning from all this typing. i hope the story didn't get too cliche at the end. ima go pass o u t n o w....(read that as if my voice was slowing down.)

*passes out*

Edited July 30, 2008 by maiq the liar