Dark Sword Ragnarok Posted July 29, 2008 Posted July 29, 2008 Okay, hopefully this one will go over better than the last! THE STORY: Okay, since the last comic, Jack, Jessa and 214 were sent to research in the Archives. The Jedi Council wanted Jessa to learn some basic Jedi history and such before going into battle. This comic shows the events of that trip. The Characters: Jack Jessa 214 Jack: Ah, here we are, the greatest place for learning in the entire Galaxy! The Great Archives! Jessa: I still don't get what we're doing here! Why aren't we training for battle? Jack: Well, there's two reasons for that. One, your not ready for that yet. Two, the Jedi Council doesn't want me in battle for a little while. Jessa: Why's that? Jack: Umm, they said it had to do with my anger problems in battle... (FLASHBACK) (END FLASHBACK) Jack: Hey, where'd that come from! Oh well, let's get inside. Jessa: Whee, a giant museum. Boring! Jack: It isn't a museum, it's the Archves. Just go inside already. 214: Ay, whaddya want me to do? Jack: Uh, just, like, clean and load the weapons. Or something. 214: Ah, I'm never appreciated 'round here. It's always bloody cleaning. I should be flying a V-19 right now! Jack: This here is a statue of... Jessa: No duh, of course it's a statue... Jack: I wasn't done. This is a statue of a nameless, but very important man. He designed many building machines and helped contributed to modern day intergalactic society. Jessa: Oh. Jack: Anyway, lets go look at the Archhive files. 214: Aww, bloody Hell! Tha darn loading mechanism is jammed! Better get Jack... 214: Hey Jack, how do you unjam this bloody loa... *click* 214: Blimey! *whoosh* Both: Woah! 214: Nevermind, it cleared now. Hope you enjoyed this one, guys! DSR Quote
Shoc Posted July 29, 2008 Posted July 29, 2008 (edited) Hahaha, this was quite funny! Especially the suddenly appearing flashback, interrupting when Jack was explaining the statue and the blaster. The first picture is a bit fuzzy though, maybe it's meant to be, but I like the humour! :skull: Edited July 29, 2008 by Shoc Quote
Dark Sword Ragnarok Posted July 29, 2008 Author Posted July 29, 2008 Hahaha, this was quite funny! Especially the suddenly appearing flashback, interrupting when Jack was explaining the statue and the blaster. The first picture is a bit fuzzy though, maybe it's meant to be, but I like the humour! :skull: Ah, thanks, buddy! Glad someone likes my humor! The first pic is blurry because the camera I was using sucks and has a hard time focusing on stuff, it was dark so I was using flouresent lighting instead of flash, because the flash always ruins the shot, and because it took literally 20 shots to get that shot, and it was the clearest one of them all! Anyways, thanks for posting so fast! DSR Quote
Shoc Posted July 29, 2008 Posted July 29, 2008 Ah, thanks, buddy! Glad someone likes my humor! The first pic is blurry because the camera I was using sucks and has a hard time focusing on stuff, it was dark so I was using flouresent lighting instead of flash, because the flash always ruins the shot, and because it took literally 20 shots to get that shot, and it was the clearest one of them all! Darn cameras! I have worse camera problems... The batteries run out not logn after I have put them in my camera. If I didn't have so much of a problem with my camera I would probablt have posted more MOC's on Eurobricks! Anyways, thanks for posting so fast! Wow, I guess I'm speedy. :skull: Quote
Dark Sword Ragnarok Posted July 29, 2008 Author Posted July 29, 2008 Darn cameras! I have worse camera problems... The batteries run out not logn after I have put them in my camera. If I didn't have so much of a problem with my camera I would probablt have posted more MOC's on Eurobricks! Wow, I guess I'm speedy. :skull: I used to have that problem, my old camera was a battery hog. And yes, you are quite a speedy little bugger! DSR Quote
Shoc Posted July 29, 2008 Posted July 29, 2008 And yes, you are quite a speedy little bugger! Why thank you. :skull: Quote
Dark Sword Ragnarok Posted July 29, 2008 Author Posted July 29, 2008 Why thank you. :skull: Your welcome, my speedy friend! DSR Quote
Shoc Posted July 29, 2008 Posted July 29, 2008 (edited) Your welcome, my speedy friend! I wonder if anyone else is going to comment on your nice comic! Well, we're only a couple of the 15 online members, and we're having two conversations in two different topics. :skull: Edited July 29, 2008 by Shoc Quote
Dark Sword Ragnarok Posted July 29, 2008 Author Posted July 29, 2008 I wonder if anyone else is going to comment on your nice comic!Well, we're only a couple of the 15 online members, and we're having two conversations in two different topics. :skull: I know, I keep getting that annoying flood control message... I hope someone else sees this and my review, they took so long to do... Maybe we should just talk in the Twilight thread now, let everyone else post here. DSR Quote
JimBee Posted July 29, 2008 Posted July 29, 2008 Shhhh.... quiet you two! Nice comic, more humorous than the first, but still needs development. Keep up the good work. Quote
Dark Sword Ragnarok Posted July 29, 2008 Author Posted July 29, 2008 Shhhh.... quiet you two! Nice comic, more humorous than the first, but still needs development. Keep up the good work. Hehe.... Thanks, I know the first one wasn't so good, but at least it explains the characters a little bit. I'm still develping most of the plot, but definately expect more like this! DSR Quote
Dovchenko Posted July 30, 2008 Posted July 30, 2008 Better than last time, and it was funnier. There's been a fairly important improvement here, and it'll defenitely continue across these comics. It's defenitely good enough to satisfy my humour, and even if some people called it "racist" just because they wanted a reason to complain... I don't mind. Do a Canadian like me, please, I'd love to see that. If you've seen Canadian Bacon with John Candy, you'll learn to laugh at yourself... ah well nevermind I'm getting off topic. Quote
Dark Sword Ragnarok Posted July 30, 2008 Author Posted July 30, 2008 Better than last time, and it was funnier. There's been a fairly important improvement here, and it'll defenitely continue across these comics. It's defenitely good enough to satisfy my humour, and even if some people called it "racist" just because they wanted a reason to complain... I don't mind. Do a Canadian like me, please, I'd love to see that. If you've seen Canadian Bacon with John Candy, you'll learn to laugh at yourself... ah well nevermind I'm getting off topic. I'm glad you liked it! I will have to do a Canadian! Ah, John Candy. I love his acting. Planes, Trains, and Automobiles, SpaceBalls, Uncle Chuck..... Ah, the memories! DSR Quote
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