Jessica Posted June 21, 2008 Posted June 21, 2008 OK, anyway, here's part II of Band of Bricks (aka Germans enter) "I'm going in," said Hans as he walked toward the door.... "Wait, I'm coming with you," said Adelfried "No, I'm not leting you go with me," whispered Hans "Why is it because of your son?" Hans stood there for a moment. "No, it's not that. You're just too young." "Is it because I remind you of your son, is that it?" Hans just stood there. "No Bernard, it's not that." "Why did you call me him then?" "I don't--it was a mistake, I'm sorry Adelfried. I just don't want to lose any more men because of it." "Is that really it? You don't want to lose men. I get it, but it's too late for that, is it?" "I said you're not coming and that's final," Hans said as he motioned for Adelfried to go back. to be continued.... Sneak preview PS: Do you notice someone in the background?
cartoondude Posted June 21, 2008 Posted June 21, 2008 Cool. i see you were able to make it less blurry this time.
tedbeard Posted June 21, 2008 Posted June 21, 2008 Much better! (Although I think pic #2 & 3 are duplicates - perhaps you copied the link by accident?)
Jessica Posted June 22, 2008 Author Posted June 22, 2008 Here's part III for all the loyal fans.... Meanwhile a drunk Indiana Jones stumbles out of a bar somewhere in Russia.... "Where am I?" He says in a drunken in manner...."Man my head is killing me..." "I better go ask those nice looking fellows where I am." "Hey guys where am I?" The four Germans looked up at him and he frowned. "Umm never mind," he then added as he walked away. Dieter then said, "Man that guy was weird looking." "Yeah, you could say that again," said Hans. "Hey didn't we see him last time we were in Germany?" Edwin asked the others. "Oh yeah, he was a officer that time. Why do you ask?" "He just looked familiar, that's all." "You couldn't be refering to the guy from Berlin, would you?" "Ja, the same guy." "I wonder what happened to his uniform." "Don't know, but with all the snipers around here. It's no wonder he choose to blend in with the crowd." "What crowd?" "I meant make himself look less obvious. We on the other hand look like invading jerks." "Ja, that's true," answered Dieter. Edwin decided to head toward the door... He slowly opened the door... To be continued....
Jessica Posted August 4, 2008 Author Posted August 4, 2008 OK, sorry for the delay and I see there's a lack of replies, so what do you think should I continue this storyline or not? I see there's not much interest and therefore should I bother with it? What gives? Anyway, I accidently forgot I about this, so now I'll have to start over. Here's the thing my original buildings were fused into this castle...... So there's a problem, I can't continue with the original premise, so here's a new one. Also if you haven't guessed Edwin is the one that's killed in action, but since were starting a new, it doesn't matter. The second thing is I couldn't start off a series with one character dying, so here's a new series where the characters barely escape death. I will upload the pictures later. Right now my camera needs to be recharged. So hopefully those who like this will like the new remake of this and will stay loyal. I'm sorry to say that I won't be continue any of the Lucky John due to a warning I got from a moderator which I won't discuss, but will disclose that I go all topic crazy and post a bunch of topics that aren't really needed. Anyway, the point of the matter is.... I will review a few sets such as the RGS, the DS set and a few new ones and give a second opinion on them if someone already posted a review. I'm sorry for the delay and hope you all liked my series so far......if not then that's OK, I think it's great that you still gave it a try anyway. Peace out for now.
fugglewyg Posted August 5, 2008 Posted August 5, 2008 Oh dear jessica it looks like you have fallen foul of the forum nazi's ! I can't see as you've done anything to really warrent the bad kid tag in my opinion so i wouldn't let it get you down. I don't post much myself as i prefer to read other peoples post and lurk unless something really catches my eye or irksme. Unlike you who posts lots, okay it may be better if you finished one story before you start another but it's not like you've killed someone. At least you are contributing to the forums and i quite like some of you mocs even if they are a little lacking in some areas as others have said - but hey we all have to start somewhere and we can't all build like some of the geniuses on here. (i have still not built an moc yet, i like to buy sets and build them as the instructions say, but oneday will start moc-ing). Come back on here and show them you don't deserve the tag by posting some cool stuff and reviews. I think there are some changes going on around here that aren't all for the better (perfect spelling and punctuation orders for example) and are making this a less relaxed place to frequent. I am begining to wonder if eventually we will have to pm the mods with a request for permission to post a bit like putting your hand up to ask a question at school
Stauder Posted August 5, 2008 Posted August 5, 2008 I reccomend you look at her last few topics before doubting the Staff's decision. Mistake 1. Mistake 2. But a Bad Kid tag may have been too much. Either way, let the staff sort it out. Stauder.
NerdFighter Posted August 5, 2008 Posted August 5, 2008 (edited) Ignoring the "Bad Kid" tag, I think that you should continue making the comics if you want to. The comic seemed to move a little slow, so if you choose to continue I would make the plot move faster. I am annoyed that you chose to end the series at such a climax in the story. About your new tag: I agree that posting bodily fluid in two separate topics was a bad idea. I don't mind ONE topic about your blood (even if it was a bit gross), but two is excessive. I also felt that you snapped back at Hinckley a little too hard. Edited August 5, 2008 by NerdFighter
Stauder Posted August 5, 2008 Posted August 5, 2008 The bad Kid tag is like being banned. Exept that you are restricted to a single forum, known as The chamber. There you try to talk the admins into un-chambering you. Stauder.
fugglewyg Posted August 5, 2008 Posted August 5, 2008 I reccomend you look at her last few topics before doubting the Staff's decision. I did re-read all her posts for the last 48 hrs when i saw the bad kid tag in case i had overlooked something she had posted.
Hinckley Posted August 5, 2008 Posted August 5, 2008 OK, let's let her be. From what I understand the story ends when all of the characters get nosebleeds and die. The End. Oh dear jessica it looks like you have fallen foul of the forum nazi's ! What's happened between the staff and Jessica could happen in other places besides posted topics, i.e. PM. Let me remind you before you go calling anyone else "nazis" that insulting any member, staff included, is against the site guidelines. Just have fun and don't worry about other people's behavior, because you can only control your own...
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