Fenghuang0296 Posted February 4, 2021 Posted February 4, 2021 (edited) *Your entry has earned 4 XP* A Wrecked Tombstone Astrid Speccroix’ Logs #5 “So do you feel better after that, Ambassador?” Astrid signed to herself and tapped her comm, hearing Kite’s voice over it. “Maybe a bit,” “Well, good. Because most forms of stress relief don’t involve arson,” She scoffed. “You think this is arson? Wait until the fire hits the fuel cells,” “. . . I’m going to have to recommend that you return now,” “Give me a few minutes,” A few minutes later, she stepped back and admired her handiwork, raising her sabre triumphantly. “There. It’ll serve as a reminder to any Imperial scum that we are not to be trifled with,” “You do remember that you’re supposed to be a diplomat, right?” “Eh. I have a diverse skillset,” The two broken BARCs, or what was left of them, burned merrily, embedded into the ground like morbid tombstones. One of the riders’ helmets hung from a support strut. Astrid beheld her work and smiled. “I needed this,” Spoiler Sorry that this is a bit late, I had tech trouble . . and honestly, I'm fully aware that this isn't my best work. I've been in a funk lately, so I'm just happy that I managed to get something presentable out by the deadline. More shots for the judges; Edited February 7, 2021 by goatman461 Quote
Brickwolf Posted February 4, 2021 Posted February 4, 2021 (edited) I like the new darker Astrid! Edited February 4, 2021 by Brickwolf Quote
RocketBoy Posted February 4, 2021 Posted February 4, 2021 I love your dialogue and characterization, always so entertaining and vivid. Quote
Macropus Posted February 4, 2021 Posted February 4, 2021 I think someone doesn´t like the Empire. Kinooine is a planet I never heard of. Quote
Darth Bjorn Posted February 4, 2021 Posted February 4, 2021 This woman is on a crusade! I'm just happy she doesn't seem to have force powers, and that the saber doesn't have a blue/green glowing blade. (correction: with that temper the blade would probably glow red... ) Quote
dvogon Posted February 6, 2021 Posted February 6, 2021 I like that female character. It has a lot of potential. The tombstone idea is an interesting one for a wreckage. Quote
marvelBoy123 Posted February 7, 2021 Posted February 7, 2021 A nice little build and your characters narrative is really interesting - nice to see a CFS character who isn't a peaceful farmer type... Quote
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