[Factions Ep. 7 - Cat A][I18 - Lipsec - TT] Old Aquaintances

[Brickwolf]

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To fulfill my deal with the Triumvirate I had to go back to Lipsec and recover the data chip. I hid the chip on the outskirts of the open pit mine, where I worked for the Mining Guild. The area was an industrial wasteland, where old mining equipment is stored to salvage it for spare parts.

When I got near the hiding place for the chip, I could not believe my bad luck: A Pyerce Stormtrooper was there camping and barbecueing a big fat Ewok Chef Nub sausage(TM)!

 

 Freeze, Pyerce boy if you want to live!

Give a man a break, I just need a place for the night and some chow!

  So you are a deserter!

Is that you Lieutenant Wolf? It´s been a long time since Endor.

  It´s Captain Wolf now. Sarge Miggs, what are you doing here? What happened?

Well, after the end of the Empire I could not go home, the Neo Republicans would arrest me as war criminal. So I joined Moff Pyerce´s forces. What else could I do? Haven´t learned anything but fighting. But Pyerce is a delusional martinet. All you get is: Death for the glory of the Pyerce Empire! In the chaos after Fondor I was able to get away.

 How about you come with me. I could use a good sergeant. I got a deal with the Triumvirate.

I heard the Triumvirate is killing everyone fighting for the other remnants.

 I promise, this won´t happen to you.

 

[Ross Fisher]

Your official pic is very dark. I know it's hard to show a dark environment, but I'd suggest using lower light before you photograph, rather than making the photo darker in post. Or, if you are going to do that, at least try to up the contrast so that the highlights work properly.

[Brickwolf]

3 hours ago, Ross Fisher said:

Your official pic is very dark. I know it's hard to show a dark environment, but I'd suggest using lower light before you photograph, rather than making the photo darker in post. Or, if you are going to do that, at least try to up the contrast so that the highlights work properly.

Thanks!

[JintaiZ]

It looks great, but it might be a good idea to tile some studs.

[halixon]

Very interesting build. I absolutely love the story as well with the inclusion of the flashback to endor!

[Brickwolf]

12 hours ago, halixon said:

Very interesting build. I absolutely love the story as well with the inclusion of the flashback to endor!

Thank you!

 

18 hours ago, JintaiZ said:

It looks great, but it might be a good idea to tile some studs. 

Thank you!I  intenionally did not tile it, to show that the ground is sand or compacted earth.

[marvelBoy123]

A nice atmospheric build and fits nicely into your story!

[Darth Bjorn]

Lot of the feedback have been given, but maybe you could also work on brick-built crates and props... ;)

[dvogon]

The atmosphere of this build is good! I find better the second photo than the first one. I also share that mixing some studs with tiles would work better. 

[MKJoshA]

Love that you tied the story back to Endor.