Anyone interested in my star wars fanfic?

[Sarg_Kulo]

http://boards.theforce.net/The_Saga/b10476/20391695/?8

My fanfic is there. It's about the Jedi Purge, I havent got very far with it.

Thought some of you might be interested. Let me know what you think.

SK

[Sarg_Kulo]

C H A P T E R I

Everyone in the temple felt it.

Not a ripple, but a wave of confusion and pain. There was no doubting it, even for the younglings.

Master Windu had just died.

The library of the great Jedi Temple fell silent. Usually, there would be the odd youngling playing about. But now, nobody moved.

A Zabrak, who

[Sarg_Kulo]

*Coughs*

*Sound of crickets*

[Sarg_Kulo]

SO you reply to uneducated R2D2 pictures of him trying to pull a trash can but when I post something intillgent, something that I belive is one of the only things I'm good at. No one can even reply. The times this thread has been visited is steadily increasing. Why can't anyone reply?

[Mister Phes]

Ya know Kulo... I can just see you heading down the same path as VCVC with the multiple posting...

Anyways... This is very well written but the its got too many characters! Unless the reader is familiar with them (not everyone knows Star Wars is in great depth) there needs to be some background explaining who they are - coz I certainly don't know who is who here. Are they your characters or they existing Star Wars characters?

[Hobbes]

SO you reply to uneducated R2D2 pictures of him trying to pull a trash can but when I post something intillgent, something that I belive is one of the only things I'm good at. No one can even reply. The times this thread has been visited is steadily increasing. Why can't anyone reply?

Adding to phes' arguments, the post is too long for me to delve into it. I like SW but don't know it that well. So I didn't read it. Maybe I will when I have time. But I probably won't reply because I couldn't really contribute.

And since the post is quite long, give people time to read it. Maybe some want to read it more often, I dunno.

The "hit count" is probably deceiving, also. People might have opened the thread, seen the long post, and left the thread again (that's what I did).

PS: I already noticed that you don't like your younger counterpart vcvc, but this thread has nothing to do with him (who, I have to add again, has been "behaving" lately). So, leave him out of this. Acting like this doesn't put you "above" him as you always claim. If you want a "war" do it via PM.