sigpro Posted July 29, 2019 Posted July 29, 2019 Inside S901 Triana, grid G8 (general map). Radio room... "Captain, we have an incoming radio message, security clearance 1" receiving war declaration by green helmet spanish AFOL, en Flickr The Captain comes in and reads the message... confirming message by green helmet spanish AFOL, en Flickr "From...Erotema Strategic Submarine Forces...To Commanding Officer S901 Triana. War has been declared on Bandaud and Plighia. Proceed with target package BA3 and send all cruise missiles. After it, rendezvous with supply ship on point RV34". ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- Grid B10, Bandaud / F8 (General Map - approx) An airbase with some planes which may be ready, or not. Bandaud airbase by green helmet spanish AFOL, en Flickr But some cruise missiles, along with laser guided bombs from a squadron of Erofighters, attack the facilities... Bandaud airbase on fire by green helmet spanish AFOL, en Flickr Bandaud airbase on fire by green helmet spanish AFOL, en Flickr And later, the fire is put out...and the HOSTIA satellite takes pictures... Bandaud airbase under attack by green helmet spanish AFOL, en Flickr Quote
TheBeeze Posted September 30, 2019 Posted September 30, 2019 Here is the breakdown for your Solo Campaign Scores and feed back: Average for Build 1: 13 Feedback Great build going here, but with all the light, I would lose the NVG top the helmets; no need for them. Your field terrain is looking much more varied and that's a good thing. I also appreciate the extra vegetation you dropped in the field as well; the effort shows! The rocks look good, if anything, maybe add a lil bit more change to the surface, it almost looks like they were prefabricated and dropped on the earth. Good job with giving credit to Katie Walker, just do it at the end in the spoiler tag. Looks like you have hit all of the requirements for this part of the build, so good job! Average for Build 2: 12 Feedback To me this one was lacking just a little bit. It was too plain and nothing really going on. With a situation like that, it would have been better to either really build in some intricate detail, or have multiple points of interest in your build. That said, for what you have you did a good job. Glad to see the build has some elevation change in it. The cows felt a little boxed in with your build. The water was a nice touch. Good Job Average for Build 3: 9 Feedback This felt very very rushed and not planned out at all. You had potential to do something really nice here but it really fell short. Never really a fan of the LDD builds, but if you're going to do one you really need to make it good. Total Overall Score: 11 Be Sure to Update Your AARs. Thanks for playing! Quote
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