marvelBoy123 Posted March 17, 2019 Posted March 17, 2019 (edited) General Map E2 The farming towns in the Ziggakrelp region are mainly inhabited by refugees from the original war of Priunulian independence. Those from Walara and Priunulia have until recently managed to live here together in peace. With tensions rising between the two nations and Dusk inciting acts of terror and violence, conflict has broken out in this area. http://Photo on 17-03-2019 at 08.09 by marvelBoy123, on Flickr A family of Priunulian plantation owners found themselves and their property mercilessly attacked by Walaran rebels. http://Photo on 17-03-2019 at 08.10 #2 by marvelBoy123, on Flickr The owner Captain Sokhor had already lost his wife in a fight with the Walarans. http://Photo on 17-03-2019 at 08.10 by marvelBoy123, on Flickr http://Photo on 17-03-2019 at 08.11 by marvelBoy123, on Flickr The military was called in in the hope that their presence may diffuse the situation. The 4th Volorsk amphibious division partnered with the 3rd Volorsk to provide all terrain transport in the Caiman HAAV (Heavy Amphibious Assault Vehicle) and the Bullfrog ARV (Amphibious Reconnaissance Vehicle). http://Photo on 17-03-2019 at 08.12 by marvelBoy123, on Flickr http://Photo on 17-03-2019 at 08.15 #2 by marvelBoy123, on Flickr Troops exited the vehicle and moved to positions http://Photo on 17-03-2019 at 08.16 by marvelBoy123, on Flickr Two soldiers moved inside the wreckage of the building. Water flooded the floor from a burst pipe, furniture was upturned and rubbish was scattered across the floor. http://Photo on 17-03-2019 at 08.17 by marvelBoy123, on Flickr http://Photo on 17-03-2019 at 08.18 by marvelBoy123, on Flickr http://image by marvelBoy123, on Flickr A rebel waited up above but he was surprised by the soldier who came up through the floor and was shot before he could react. The soldiers then checked the building for further insurgents but it was empty http://Photo on 17-03-2019 at 08.19 by marvelBoy123, on Flickr They managed to take the other rebel alive for questioning, then headed back to their vehicles - their mission complete. http://Photo on 17-03-2019 at 08.21 by marvelBoy123, on Flickr They had managed to save the old mans life, but he had lost so much a hand, a home, a wife ... http://Photo on 17-03-2019 at 08.21 #2 by marvelBoy123, on Flickr and a son. Notes: -The main focus of this build was the wrecked building, inspiration came from Andreas and his brilliant scenes- Raid, Barren Main and Impact. http://Photo on 17-03-2019 at 08.22 by marvelBoy123, on Flickr - I tried to make the scene seem authentic to the setting: crops in fields, a rough stone road. http://Photo on 17-03-2019 at 08.23 by marvelBoy123, on Flickr - Some close up shots of the vehicles. http://Photo on 17-03-2019 at 08.23 #2 by marvelBoy123, on Flickr http://Photo on 17-03-2019 at 08.24 by marvelBoy123, on Flickr http://Photo on 17-03-2019 at 08.25 by marvelBoy123, on Flickr The Bullfrog, with two opening doors and space for two minifigures or one minifigure and a mortar attachment as show in the main story. Inspiration came from Pixel Fox's brilliant rendition of the VW Type 166 Schwimmwagen on Flickr. I used the first four studs of this design then designed the rest myself. Credit where credit is due. http://Photo on 17-03-2019 at 08.26 by marvelBoy123, on Flickr http://Photo on 17-03-2019 at 08.26 #2 by marvelBoy123, on Flickr http://Photo on 17-03-2019 at 08.26 #3 by marvelBoy123, on Flickr The Caiman with a opening rear hatch for soldiers entry and exit. Edited March 17, 2019 by marvelBoy123 Quote
TheBeeze Posted April 7, 2019 Posted April 7, 2019 You’ve been awarded ( 2 ) points. Judges’ comments… Pictures are a little better for this one but still need some help. You might benefit from taking pictures out side or in a better lit room. As far as the build goes, there is a decent amount of detail here but it looks a little rushed. Slow down on the number of builds and go for quality. Again, there is more building effort going on, but I see many of the same issues from your previous builds. If only there was an overview shot of the entire build? Please, take the notes we give you into account. Work on the lighting. The wonderful thing about digital cameras is you can take many pictures of the same thing from slightly different angles and then choose which is the best shot to include. Too many pictures and your audience may get bored. Please apply these points to your future builds and your scores will increase, I guarantee it! Be Sure to Update Your AARs. Thanks for playing! Quote
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