GBW-CP7-Balafih- Xenorian sunset

[Johannsued]

Oscar Amy base

These are the last days of Xenor.The country is on its knees,the people have become refugees because of their own goverment.But after the Nuklear attack on the city of Haams,RoN troops are about to finally free this once proud coutry from this cruel military dictatorship. balafihan troops prepare to take one of the last strongholds of the xenorian Army.After a week of artillery bombardement they moved in...

Xenorian troops are scattered over the ruins of their base,some holding guard,others planning the last stand and some are just talking.

http://P7100158 by Jan Südmersen, auf Flickr

http://P7100157 by Jan Südmersen, auf Flickr

http://P7100161 by Jan Südmersen, auf Flickr

"Starlord, this is rocket.target in sight,beginning supress fire,over!" "Rocket,this is starlord, understood, moving in, over!"

Suddenly, the air raid sirens went off, and an a-10 opened fire on the base:

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while teh xenorian soldiers tried to recover; balafihan Marines with CBRN protection moved in:

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http://P7100176 by Jan Südmersen, auf Flickr

http://P7100177 by Jan Südmersen, auf Flickr

"This is Starlord to HQ: we are ready to attack,over" " attack confirmed, Get them,over"

So they attacked. the xenorians tried to defend...

http://P7100180 by Jan Südmersen, auf Flickr

http://P7100184 by Jan Südmersen, auf Flickr

But they were overwhelmed quickly

http://P7100186 by Jan Südmersen, auf Flickr

This is Starlord: base IS secured,but we found some missile silos.no radiation signs, green light for Gamorrah,Over"

"gamorrah inbound"

The marines with the callsign "Gamorrah" moved in, secured the prisoners and collected the bodies of the fallen,while the CBRN unit tries to open one of the silos..

http://P7100194 by Jan Südmersen, auf Flickr

http://P7100196 by Jan Südmersen, auf Flickr

http://P7100197 by Jan Südmersen, auf Flickr

Overwiew shots:

http://P7100204 by Jan Südmersen, auf Flickr

http://P7100152 by Jan Südmersen, auf Flickr

Edited July 10, 2018 by Johannsued

[TheBeeze]

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Judges’ comments…

Your pictures and idea are very thought out and look great. The problem I had was with the destruction of the structure. To me, that just looked like random parts and things ripped apart and dropped on your base plate there. To have the building or whatever it is appear to be damaged perhaps in the future considering building up some more of the structure and showing certain areas being destroyed. I understand what you were going for here, but it is kind of hard to give you points for it. The A-10 shot was a cool idea. Definitely a step up from your last build, keep it up.     

Terrain is great; single road path, some fencing, raised area for the building and hangar type build.  The building on the left though is a lil concerning.  Maybe build the actual building next time and then break it apart.  This way you will have some chunks of the building in tact and still, also plenty of debris on the ground.  Especially since the roof to the hangar type building looked to be 100% in tact still.  So a lil cohesion is not a bad thing.  Other than the terrain though, there really wasn't too much of a build.  Thus, the beat up chunks of rubble can help a lot.  Soldiers look good and the story line flows.  The turbo fans underground are most likely in cement?  I can see the fan covers but that's it.  There are no other details in that area that look to be built.  Watch youor background, you want to use the cover so no one can see any seams or breaks and the background just blends in.  If you show the wall or floor meeting the background, it stands out a lot, and that deters from your build!  Not bad, but I know you have the potential to do so much more.

 

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