SpaceJoey86 Posted May 6, 2018 Posted May 6, 2018 Nilsen Borockovick, a skilled guild-master almost ready to set up shop, journeyed to Bardo to complete a few final projects. First he met up with a local woodcutter and ordered some timber - to be delivered to the location of his projects the next week DSCN8418 The cost was one auric coin, with a further three to be paid on when the goods were delivered. DSCN8422 Also, all the trees were from a managed forest, and would be replanted to keep a steady supply available. Spoiler DSCN8427 DSCN8425 DSCN8424 ooc - Couldn't find my sigfig so decided to use this character for now. Just a small build but I like it. Quote
Elostirion Posted May 7, 2018 Posted May 7, 2018 Nice layout, clever idea to use the masonry bricks lying like this. Good use of the sign as well. Looking forward to the continuation of your story! Quote
Darnok Posted May 7, 2018 Posted May 7, 2018 (edited) Nice little build. Does it only look like it, or are the green plates rather dusted? If they are: a smooth brush is all you need to get rid of it. Another thing I noted is that the story makes little use of its context. It is implied that your character is supposed to be an instrument maker looking for the best wood available - but you could have spelled that out. Same for his motivation, which is most likely to ue the Bardo festival as an opportunity to make a name for himself in terms of instrument building. As it is, the story seems to be rather random to me. Edited May 7, 2018 by Drunknok Quote
SpaceJoey86 Posted May 13, 2018 Author Posted May 13, 2018 A week later, Nilsen had finished his masterpiece: a wind powered organ. DSCN8433 Although his skill was in optics, he decided to make something different, and this was it. DSCN8442 The music was slow and haunting, played solo and powered solely by the wind. DSCN8438 Quote
Darnok Posted May 13, 2018 Posted May 13, 2018 A fine continuation of your story, and an interesting take on an organ build. I like both, well done! Quote
SpaceJoey86 Posted May 14, 2018 Author Posted May 14, 2018 20 hours ago, Professor Thaum said: A fine organ ! 16 hours ago, Drunknok said: A fine continuation of your story, and an interesting take on an organ build. I like both, well done! Thanks! Quote
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