Adamsons Posted May 5, 2018 Posted May 5, 2018 (edited) STUDICA MAP C7 It's late afternoon in a small abandoned beach somewhere in West Xenor. Usually no one goes there as the rocks cut off the access there. There are Xenor Army soldiers who guard the facilities. As there are no threats around, some of them used in auxiliary works or just passing time Inside the building there are 5 scientist who are workingin several highly classified projects. [url=https://flic.kr/p/25HU2bf In the top of the rocky hill, a squad from New Brickica "Skallax Battalion" led by both colonel Hansolo Mak and Major Junihiro Mak, are ready to attack to the facilities. When they got their positions , sniper shot the guard under the building when the soldiers on top shot the guard in the door and the sleeping beauty right under them. The guard who was carried the garbage start running back to grab his rifle...but in was too late. Right after that, Skallax soldiers secured the perimeter and entered the building. All the scientist were surrendered without resistance Major Junihiro hacked the password in the facilities mainframe, same time Hansolo accompanied by a soldier with a wifi camera examine the area, sending the video to the headquarters Edited May 23, 2018 by Adamsons forgot the Map site Quote
Spud The Viking Posted May 8, 2018 Posted May 8, 2018 Great building, looks very sleek and very much like a research post. Well done! Quote
Tezclatipoca Posted May 9, 2018 Posted May 9, 2018 Good research facility ! I like the design of this building with all those window panels ! The landscape is well thought even if it seems you've been a little bit too big for you : less details in the landscape than in the building. Perhaps adding waves on the sea, or more BURP hiding work on the cliff could have help. Otherwise, the building itself is really good and well detailled ! Good job ! Quote
TheBeeze Posted May 29, 2018 Posted May 29, 2018 You’ve been awarded (7) points. Judges’ comments… I think your building design here is pretty neat. The skylight windows were a nice touch with how you layered them in. Inside the building you have great detail work. The rockwal just off to the side is very nicely done and the curves on it are great. My suggestion for the future would be to try and do some minor things to break up your landscaping. Like the water for example, just dropping some clear plates or cheese slopes to show some motion would go a long way as right now this is just sitting on a base plate. I'm personally not a fan of the Samurai thing, but I'm not knocking points for that. Overall this is a solid build, nicely done! Research center, located on the shore line of a lake, right? I think the build quality here was pretty good. You took a risk with the ceiling and it paid off well. Your rock work and cliff side conveyed that alcove look very well. From the researcher's stand point, I think it was poorly defended, but that's more a comment and doesn't affect the build. Two colors of sand was a good move, wet and dry. Maybe add a lil ripple to the lake/pool? Lighting was good, but you may want to add a backdrop of some type? No one wants to see the floor of where you live, but by covering it with a sheet, it brings the focus back to your build. Enjoyed not seeing only overhead shots, thank you for mixing it up. Good job! Be Sure to Update Your AARs. Thanks for playing! Quote
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