Darnok Posted March 3, 2018 Posted March 3, 2018 618, Day 27 of the 1st month, In the jungles of Celestia I am still deep in the jungles of Celestia. It was right to send the young Ms. Garnet back to Jameston, but I do miss her company. The last weeks have been a challenge, and at many times I wished I still had her by my side. The jungle has become wilder and more difficult to pass, so I keep my trusted axe ready at all times, just in case. I have been following the river for over five weeks now. If there really was a civilisation in this area as I have assumed after finding the temple, the signs of its existence are scarce. There were a few small ruins along my path, but none were more than some overgrown walls, claimed by the jungles centuries ago. So it was all the more exciting when I came across something different today. Other than the previous ruins, it seemed to be a shrine of sorts, and relatively intact. The similarity to the ruined temple were I found the Supreme Orchid was striking. I could not help but stand in awe. After some time I continued my journey, with new enthusiasm for what mysteries this place had still to offer.I could not help but feeling watched though... ================================================================================= The adventures of Reinhard Wolffson on Celestia are not over! You can find the previous story here. There is no definite plan for the continuation of the story, I go with the ideas as they come. I know that @Elostirion is also further exploring Celestia - since I do not want to create any story conflicts, could you please send me a PM with what I should NOT do? The same goes to @Bregir: if there is any overarching storyline already decided in the background, please let me know what I can do to either help building on it, or at least not contradict it. Thanks to both of you in advance. Some more shots of the "main build" without minifig, and the mysterious watchers: Not caring about property size at all was kind of refreshing, and I think this is my first build with a somewhat irregular base. I will definitely do more of this, it was quite fun and easy to build. As always, C&C is appreciated. Quote
Mesabi Posted March 5, 2018 Posted March 5, 2018 Excellent use of Foliage Drunknok, and good story as well. I'd like to see Reinhard return to civilized territory though, he's a good character, and could use some WTC shenanigans. Quote
Garmadon Posted March 8, 2018 Posted March 8, 2018 Nicely done, mate! The ruins are quite neat, and I'm liking that little bit of a build with the natives hid away in it! Great to see you're keeping up this story too! Quote
Elostirion Posted March 11, 2018 Posted March 11, 2018 (edited) Excellent write-up for a neat little jungle scene. I'd suggest some more elevation of the ground and even denser jungle at the edges of the MOC, and maybe a tan tile 1x6 on to of the altar to cover the studs, but that's about all I can suggest. Great work, keep it up please. Edited March 11, 2018 by Elostirion Quote
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