Johannsued Posted January 11, 2018 Posted January 11, 2018 (edited) "Welcome back to Xnn, the Xenor news network.My name is Jonathan Deroy, and my guest for today is air force general Markus Mcdonald. P1110309 today we will talk about the agressions from The RoN and CoAC, and what our great goverment will do against possible threats, but at first; whats in that briefcase you brought here today?" P1110310 "unfortunately i cant say anything about the briefcase without risking the safety of our proud natio- REBELS!! GET BEHIND THE DES- P1110311 ARRRRGGHHHH!! "good evening my fellow Xenorians!Im veeerry sorry to stop this interesting conversation but i got something important to say P1110312 .At first i want to tell you something about our "proud nation": these opressors have started a war against 2 global superpowers, and one of them ,the RoN even tried to help us against the Brutal CoAC! how does this serve our country? It doesnt! so we, the citizens of xenor have decided to rise! we are the Servants of Freedom! P1110314 i have to go now, our opressors will stop this broadcast every second,but i will take this briefcase full of secret plans whith me. Rise Xenorians,RiFRRRRZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ P1110315 Edited January 11, 2018 by Johannsued Wrong name for rebels Quote
The Great Brick War Posted January 23, 2018 Posted January 23, 2018 You’ve been awarded (2) points. Judges’ comments… Very Original Idea. Unfortunately this build is lacking in the fact that it is more of a story than a build and not much here for us to see. Your creativity needs to carry over from your story telling to your building. From what we can see here, you did a nice job its just not enough to really give it a great score. A good idea and a nice story, but the build is rather simplistic. Even if it's rarely shown in actual broadcasts, details such as cameras, lights, and similar studio equipment could be good additions. Be Sure to Update Your AARs. Thanks for playing! Quote
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