Mesabi Posted January 9, 2018 Posted January 9, 2018 Location: Arlinsport Type: Small Commercial The Bank of Corrington's payment desk was seldom graced by anyone from the WTC, but today, there was an exception. Paying some debts by North White, on Flickr "You people, are actually paying?" The banker asked in surprise. Paying some debts by North White, on Flickr "Of course! The WTC always pays its debts. Eventually. We're always com-" The Marine was cut off "Why is the chest leaking?" The banker asked in concern. Paying some debts by North White, on Flickr "Uh.. I think we grabbed the wrong chest. Terribly sorry." The two marines grabbed the dripping chest and hurried out. The Guardsman grabbed a broom. Paying some debts by North White, on Flickr An hour later they returned to the bank, carrying a chest clearly filled with gold. As they walked in, one of the marines slipped in the mysterious liquid. Paying some debts by North White, on Flickr Gold flew everywhere, landing in the puddle and underneath chests. Paying some debts by North White, on Flickr The banker said nothing. "Well that's half of the loan sorry-we're-not-cleaning-it-up-bye." Said a marine, and the two darted out. Paying some debts by North White, on Flickr And the rest of the day, the room stank of what was probably horse blood. FIN Thanks for viewing this little build to commemorate me paying off some of the loan I took from the BoC! @Bregir, funds will transfer when I get to it. If Arlinsport would like to license this build as a small commercial, that would be great as well. C&C appreciated! Quote
Darnok Posted January 9, 2018 Posted January 9, 2018 As the saying goes: pecunia non olet! The build is nicely detaild, the minifig posing is good, and the story - as usual - is hilarious. Well done! The following criticism is moaning on quite a high level: the lighting is not that great in some pictures (especially the first one), some of the brown plates look dusty, and the chest on the top right in the last pictures looks like it is floating a bit (not pressed on the plate below?). These are minor things really. I really like what I see! But... Just now, Mesabi said: @Bregir, funds will transfer when I get to it ... would it not be wiser to first pay the debt, and then tell the story? Quote
Capt Wolf Posted January 9, 2018 Posted January 9, 2018 Nice little build. I like the wall and the shelves, and the general office detail. But I really like the leaking chest! It reminds me of another RP game I played a long time ago, when my character was forced to hide a dead body in a crate marked "body parts". Quote
Roadmonkeytj Posted January 9, 2018 Posted January 9, 2018 11 hours ago, Drunknok said: <latin, praise, criticism> But... ... would it not be wiser to first pay the debt, and then tell the story? Famous last words "I'll do it tomorrow" Besides that was only er um half the payment lol. 3 hours ago, Capt Wolf said: <stuffs,and then>, when my character was forced to hide a dead body in a crate marked "body parts". If its clearly marked is it really hiding? Lol @Mesabi I like the story and its a clever little build ... Odd that an hour later and they were still cleaning up the mess lol Quote
Mesabi Posted January 10, 2018 Author Posted January 10, 2018 18 hours ago, Drunknok said: The build is nicely detaild, the minifig posing is good, and the story - as usual - is hilarious. Well done! The following criticism is moaning on quite a high level: the lighting is not that great in some pictures (especially the first one), some of the brown plates look dusty, and the chest on the top right in the last pictures looks like it is floating a bit (not pressed on the plate below?). These are minor things really. I really like what I see! Thanks! When I took the pictures I thought I had enough daylight to make it look alright, but unfortunately, it didn't turn out quite perfect. 18 hours ago, Drunknok said: would it not be wiser to first pay the debt, and then tell the story? Nah.... 10 hours ago, Capt Wolf said: Nice little build. I like the wall and the shelves, and the general office detail. Thanks! 7 hours ago, Roadmonkeytj said: Famous last words "I'll do it tomorrow" Besides that was only er um half the payment lol. @Mesabi I like the story and its a clever little build ... Odd that an hour later and they were still cleaning up the mess lol Yeah, it really got into the floorboards. Quote
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