GBW-Cp 4 Balafih: Wolverines

[Johannsued]

RoN attack on carrefour

operation 2

After the distress call of the balafihan embassy, a team of marines was sent during "ripsaw" to secure the embassy but before they arrived, a small group of resistance fighters

named "wolverines"broke trough the enemies and helped the Embassador and his team to defend the embassy until the marine arrived.

PA300241 by Jan Südmersen, auf Flickr

When the Marines arrived, the CoAC troops quickly started to retreat:

PA300256 by Jan Südmersen, auf Flickr

As the embassy was secured, the team informed the Commander with the new satcomm :

PA300255 by Jan Südmersen, auf Flickr

"This is Sgt. Kowalski: the embassy is secured, i repeat ,the embassy is secured."

And here is an overwiew pic:

PA300260 by Jan Südmersen, auf Flickr

 

Edited October 30, 2017 by Johannsued

[Tezclatipoca]

A nice action beginning.

The overview build makes us see the Ambassy building I would wish to see as background of the fight scene. You also should have made more variation on the grassy fields around the Ambassy (perhaps a crater of a mortar shot...) it would have made it more realistic.

Thats a nice job and the action is great, served by a good minifig posing.

good job ! 

[paintballman]

• Pros: the Radio Sat Comm (probably is the same design as @Faladrin - nice common detail), the use in the story of resistance fighters (who like some poor firemen refused to abadoned the city and stay to fight), the gate and the gatehouse
• Cons: not many details on the ground
• Hightlight: the Shark!!! Is it a statue? What's the story behind that?
• Suggestion: I would like to see more details on the fighters around the grenade launcer

[The Great Brick War]

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Judges’ comments…

Nicely done and cool touch with the story. My issue with the build is lack of finishing details. Behind the walls you just have open grean ground with nothing going on. Even if grass was your point, you could do sidewalks or something. Also, the shark....whats up with that?        

Very orginal story. More details please and please just span that bed sheet....    

A decent build that ties in well with some of the other stories. I’d suggest trying to add some more details to the overall build, such as more custom plants and additional details. Even a well manicured lawn doesn’t have to be perfect or could have some paths. For your presentation, I’d try to make the sheet tighter to avoid wrinkles and folds. It just look more professional that way.  

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