[GBW CP3] Roadside slaughter

[Mesabi]

On a lonely road in Briolui...

GBW Campaign 3 by North White, on Flickr

"Ve Shall crush the Briolooey dogs and feast upon they're remains." Said a Filace Soldier

"Yas, and Ve Shall have much farmland vhen de var is ova." Said the other.

GBW Campaign 3 by North White, on Flickr

But unfortunatley for them, a soldier sat behind sandbags in a position built into the cliff.

GBW Campaign 3 by North White, on Flickr

In a burst of machine gun fire, the poorly constructed Filacian Jeep collapsed into two, ending any hope for Filace to take the sector.

GBW Campaign 3 by North White, on Flickr

FIN

Yeah, yeah, I've been on hiatus for a while. Sorry Stash, for letting you down. C&C or whatever.

[sigpro]

Poor Filace soldiers! 

[paintballman]

R.I.P 

Nice ambush!

[The Great Brick War]

You’ve been awarded (4) points.

Judges’ comments…

From what I can see, it looks like you have decent sized build here. That's about all I can see, You need to work on your photos a bit so we can see more the detail in your builds. Limiting someones perspective with a picture is great to focus on a detail as long as you show the big picture too. Also, it's looking like your landscaping could use a little variation, everything looks a bit square kind of like an 8 bit video game. Work on it!

I see many different colors, and that's good as it draws me into your build. The problem is, the pictures are so low lit that I see a flash reflection and overall the pics are still very dark. Be careful when you use another country's forces; you don't want to create a story for them that could create too much blowback. The construction of your jeep/vehicle is actually really good. When building, think as if you were creating a war movie or a scene from a real military assault/defense/mission. That's how I like to do it. I can envision a jeep rolling through a choke point without knowing it's going through a choke point. Would there be one man hiding in a bunker or more than two? Were there other soldiers hiding outside the bunker? little things like that can give you ideas on what else to add to a scene.

An interesting build and a fun ambush. Using the seaweed as vines along the edge of the rocks is clever and a nice touch, as it the brick built tree on the top. The vehicle also has some nice details and good parts usage to make it interesting. I would suggest adding some other parts along the base of the cliff to help add some details, such as smaller rocks and boulders while differentiating between the different BURPs. The terrain could also use a little work. Just adding some dirt, fences, signs, etc. can go a long way and add some realism to a scene. I did enjoy the story, but the campaign calls for coordination with your allies. I cannot see any reference to any allied forces. This issue did not destroy your score, but they did result in the loss of a few easy points.

Thanks for playing!