[GBW] - Sabotage - Briolui - The Darker Side of Life

[TheBeeze]

The Darker Side of Life

Map Name: Studica
Grid: H3

Throughout northern Briolui, scattered oil derricks and pump stations litter the arid lands providing the country with the fuel it needs to carry on. 

  

 
Jack: What do you make of all this?

 
Chris: What, you mean us being here?

 
Jack: Yeah, what do you think of our assignment.

 
Chris: Well I'm bored sir. I'd prefer to be headed off to the front if I'm being honest. 

 
Jack: I got news for you kid, you're on the front lines. Any day now tanks might come rolling across the plains over there, or planes might come over the mountains. Keep your head on a swivel. 

 
Chris: Is this a delivery coming in?

 

 
Jack: Yeah. He's here all the time hauling huge crates with his tiny tractor. 

 

 
Jack: Good Evening Abjan.

Abjan: Good Evening my friends.

 
Jack: A little late for a shipment tonight, no?

Abjan: I don't ask these questions. With a war coming it, only makes sense that oil production will increase. They call me to drive you barrels, so I drive them.

 
Jack: Okay, bring em in.

Chris: *Whispering* You're not gonna check the truck first?

 

 
Jack: No, we checked his truck for months. All it did was slow down production and waste our time. Besides, old Abjan is nothing to worry about. He's a relic of an old tribe who used to live up here in the North. For a long time they had a lot of influence in the area until they got cozy with some rebels. His family was killed years ago in a raid by our forces into his village looking for rebels. They were caught in the crossfire. I feel bad for him really. His business was ruined, he used to have one of the largest farms in the village. The old man barely scrapes by and lives alone to himself. 

  

Abjan: Hello George.

George: Abjan. What are you doing here so late.

Abjan: I don't ask these questions. They send me to deliver barrels, so I deliver them.

George: I understand but, we just got them this morning. We don't even have anywhere to put them.

  

George: I'm gonna go call this in and see why they sent you. 

 

Abjan: Do not make me use this George. I don't want to, but I will. If you stay out of our way, you won't get hurt.

George: "Our" way?

 

Abjan: We are here to take back what is ours. 

 

Abjan: For too long our people have stood by having our lands taken out from under us and our families killed by your government. We have laid down for too long and now with the support of your enemies, we finally have an opportunity to stand. 

  

Abjan: My men are redirecting your pump station to send the oil down the old pipeline which runs under our village. I have trucks coming to lock this station down.  

George: Just kill me now. Don't draw this out.

Abjan: George, my friend. We are not going to kill you. You are one of the few with a brain, like Jack. You show respect to our people and know that your just our guests. No you are being spared to send a message to your government that we are through being walked on. They are going to be so tied down in their war, they won't have time to fight us too. 

MEANWHILE

 
Jack: Something is wrong here. 

 
Chris: Huh?

 
Jack: He's never here this long. I'm going to see why George isn't answering his radio.

Abjan: GO! GO! Don't let them over here. Stop them!

 

 
Jack: What the......

 

 

[Phadeout]

I like the strong story telling element that always comes through in your builds, it really helps the game develop although I can't approve of the story this time(!).

There are lots of little details which help the build like the hoses and computer terminals, which could have been left out if you wanted, but the build is better for them so congrats! Oh and that is one seriously high powered little buggy.

On a side note - you've labelled your build as - Briolui - is that because the action is set there and therefore we should be doing that or is it a mistake and it should be - Filace - as that is your country?  I had been assuming the latter but as I plan on putting up a sabotage build of my own soon thought I'd check.

[TheBeeze]

41 minutes ago, Phadeout said:

Briolui - is that because the action is set there and therefore we should be doing that

So the Sabotage side builds say that you are using resistance, rebels, freedom fighters, etc in other countries to cause internal mayhem in a country. So we should be titling the builds based on the country that the turmoil is happening and being represented.

.......Labeling this as a Filace build would insinuate that Filace was involved somehow. Obviously, there is NO chance of that being possible. At all. In any way. *Takes napkin and wipes sarcasm off of keyboard*

Now obviously in future builds when countries start invading other countries, they will want to label their builds based on the country they are representing even if say Filace pushes halfway through Briolui.....

Everyone was saying they wanted more categories of side builds but no one has done one of these yet. 

 

Edited April 25, 2017 by Thebeeze111

[VaderFan2187]

2 hours ago, Thebeeze111 said:

Obviously, there is NO chance of that being possible. At all. In any way. *Takes napkin and wipes sarcasm off of keyboard*

2 hours ago, Thebeeze111 said:

Everyone was saying they wanted more categories of side builds but no one has done one of these yet. 

Thanks for doing this Beeze. I wanted to do one of these but didn't know how to do it.

[KyloStabbedFirst]

The story is really deep. I feel bad for both sides, and the build is great too.

[VaderFan2187]

3 hours ago, KyloStabbedFirst said:

The story is really deep. I feel bad for both sides, and the build is great too.

I never feel sorry for those in Briolui

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Thanks for showing the sabotage build, I think it confused a few but it was good to see the story unfold. Good yard area, trucks, troops, and sabotuers. There's a lot going on from different angles. That blue background though!!!

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