[GBW] - CP1 - Alsarh - military rail transport

[Brickwolf]

"Amateurs talk about tactics, but professionals study logistics."
- Gen. Robert H. Barrow, USMC (27. Commandant of the Marine Corps)

As part of it´s defensive preparations Alsarh is moving troops to its western provinces. Here we see a small part of this effort:

Feldweibel (Sergeant) Hodson and Korporal Bauermann have just finished loading a tractor truck on a railcar.

Korporal Bauermann is tightening the tie down chains:

Feldweibel Hodson is talking with the Wagenmeister (Carmaster)  of the Königlich Alsarhische Eisenbahn Gesellschaft (Royal Alsarhian Railroad Company):

 

[Stash2Sixx]

Fastest way to move ground units and supplies across land is a train.

I look forward to invading this station at some point!

[The Great Brick War]

You've Been Awarded (4) Point(s):

Judges Comments (not all judges comment):

Give us more detail. Your ideas are full of potential, you just need to put a little more into them. The train car and platform could have benefited from either some tiles, or railing, or something. Though the truck was intended to be basic, you could have had a little more detail on it. So again, your ideas and story are great but you need to give us some more detail in the build. Keep working!    

No terrain, no geography, no culture, but a little bit of equipment.  You seem to be supporting the campaign instead of digging in.  Also, there is no indication of a map grid or which map this takes place in.  Be sure to read the requirements for each build as this may affect scores in future builds. As to your build...so much potential here.The white background as one piece was great, and the point is to have a solid background shot.  Your first pic should be one of your best.  It should not show the ends of your background!!!  Detail wise, you had a good start but it's as if you forgot to finish or just did not have enough time.  Wheel chocks on the rail car, GREAT DETAIL!!!  I see the chocks for in front of the tires, but where are the ones for behind the tires?  Drop a couple of crates onto the depot platform, maybe add a lil bit on the bottom of the rail car; add those small details, they add up really fast.  Also, be sure you do not block your light source when snapping pics.  The underside of the rail car looks as if it does not even exist at times.  I look forward to your future builds!

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