[GBW] Troop Build Up: Garage Scene

[Mesabi]

Side Mission for the GBW campaign 1. Please let me know if this is tagged wrong

Captain Mesabi surveyed his personal company, Pvt Heidi and Pvt Johnson.

GBW1 by North White, on Flickr

"We're moving out. Orders are to get with the rest of the company and head to the front lines."

"Sir yes Sir!"

GBW1 by North White, on Flickr

They hopped into the jeep and drove away.

GBW1 by North White, on Flickr

FIN

Thanks for viewing my first GBW build! C&C appreciated.

View of the entire building

GBW1 by North White, on Flickr

I'm also using this for a BoBS build, but there's no penalty for reusing builds in BoBS so this gets posted first.

[Phadeout]

I think you are supposed to but the country you represent in the title too.

I like the build  I know you are away from most of your bricks at the moment but you still got some good stuff done here. 

I like the indiana Jones torsos, they'll look really good en masse swarming enemy positions ;)

[The Great Brick War]

You've Been Awarded (1) Point(s):

Judges Comments (not all judges comment):

The little depot is not bad, could have used a little more detailing all around. The jeep could benefit from being wider so you can fit minifigs side by side. Not much of a story here. You mention front lines, where are the shots being fired already? Lastly, the presentation needs a little work. Transition the the floor of the building to the outside, maybe use some tiles, etc. Also, I'd suggest using a backdrop for your build. Maybe a piece of foam board or a bed sheet would allow focus to remain on the building itself. Not bad for a first build.  In the future, please put your country name in the title. 

So, you've got a start, now to expand on that.  Buildings from the 16th century would not be the same and used the same as buildings from the 21st century.  So please, build differently fro GBW and BoBS.  Then, add details.  Plates are a good foundation, but tiles show a smooth finish.  The focus of your build is your build right?  So keep the back all one solid color as not to draw attention away, and use lots of light, natural light is best.  I look forward to seeing further builds.

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Thanks for Playing and Have a Happy Easter!