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[VaderFan2187]

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"Welcome back from brick, uh, break, to the RNN Nightly News!"

"Today on RNN Nightly News we have a very special guest: Commander Zeke Brickblaze of the Refnor Military! Thanks for being on the show, Commander."

"My pleasure. Thanks for having me on the show."

"With the growing tensions between Briolui, Toohati, and Filace, what does the Refnor military think?"

"Of course we don't want to jump to conclusions, but we want to be prepared to protect our people as well. This is even more important considering Refnor borders these two RON nations. Which is why we are recruiting people to join the Refnor military!"

"You heard that, straight from the Commander of the Refnor Military himself! What are you waiting for? Sign up for the Refnor military now!"

Ooh, Refnor Military recruitment? I'll call my friend Sabrina and see if she wants to join as well...

 

Next part: The Enlistment

Edited April 26, 2017 by VaderFan2187
Added next part

[VaderFan2187]

UPDATE: I understand the images in the above story may not be complete enough to judge. Here are more images of the builds:

And everything all together…

Edited March 15, 2017 by VaderFan2187
UPDATE 2: the above is an LDD build, just to say it out in black and white, though the above images should be clear enough ;)

[Ellisss_2]

Your builds look good, may I suggest rendering your builds it would drastically improves the appearance.

[VaderFan2187]

31 minutes ago, Ellisss_2 said:

Your builds look good, may I suggest rendering your builds it would drastically improves the appearance.

Thanks, do you mean render the pics of the entire builds I posted? Like this one? 

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I would've rendered it, but I was trying to upload the whole batch quickly before someone commented that the whole builds could not be seen 

[Ellisss_2]

@VaderFan2187 Sorry for not being clear; I mean for you to render your scenes, like Umbra-Manis has done with his news report scene! 

[Brandon Stark]

Try Bluerender, its easy and fast. It also shows you how it works on the page.

[TheBeeze]

You've Been Awarded (1) Point(s):

Judges Comments (not all judges comment):

I like the detail through out. Didn't like the presentation of them all next to each other.

Basic story, but it feels as if you are introducing some charcters that will join the military. You should render your builds before you display them, rendering makes a huge difference in quality. Please, look into it. I would leave out the line up of builds. Unless it's needed, don't bother.

You can Update your AAR Post with your points to keep track.

[VaderFan2187]

Just now, Thebeeze111 said:

I would leave out the line up of builds. Unless it's needed, don't bother.

Oh dear, shouldn't have done that. I did that to show you their relative sizes. :(

Will try to improve with my next build.