Mesabi Posted February 8, 2017 Posted February 8, 2017 Location: G09 Greater Drigo Tags: Spaceship "Well, I'm glad you're healed up Captain. Sorry your mission on the Axle yielded literally nothing." Said Bo'sun Jacobs "Yeah, I'm alive, that's what counts." Replied Captain Mesabi Judgement by North White, on Flickr "Maybe next time you assault the enemy's flagship you should take along a competent crew that you've come to rely on." Said Bo'sun Jacobs "Oh for the love of... how long are you going to hold this over my head?" Replied Captain Mesabi "Pretty much forever." Judgement by North White, on Flickr "How long is it to the launchpad? And I still don't know why we can't just use Icarus Returning." "We're almost there, and Icarus Returning Isn't suited for our current needs. We need something capable of a good fight. Icarus Returning just can't do that." "I suppose." The Rest of the Ride Continued in Silence. "Well, we're here." Said Bo'sun Jacobs Judgement by North White, on Flickr Judgement by North White, on Flickr "Dr. Phillips? Why are you still with us, shouldn't you be doing archaeology or something?" Asked Captain Mesabi Judgement by North White, on Flickr "Nah, I have tenure. I can do whatever the Brick I want. So, I'm with you schmucks from now on." Said Dr. Phillips. "Whatever, we need a Redshirt anyways." Said Captain Mesabi. "Hey!" Judgement by North White, on Flickr "Alright Men, we are set to go. The KSS Judgement is at your command Captain." Said Bo'sun Jacobs "Well, there's no time to waste. Everyone aboard." Said Captain Mesabi Judgement by North White, on Flickr Judgement by North White, on Flickr "Captain! Good to see you're feeling better." Said Rusty Judgement by North White, on Flickr "Thank you Rusty. We'll be facing some dangerous threats from now on. I'll need you to keep the engines running smooth." "You literally just described my job." "And?" "I don't know, I'd just hope that you'd think I know how to do my job." "Look, I meant that to be motivational." "Well, it did the opposite." "I'm just going to go fly the ship now..." Judgement by North White, on Flickr "Well Captain, I'm ready when you are." Said Bo'sun Jacobs Judgement by North White, on Flickr "Jacobs, I was born ready." Judgement by North White, on Flickr Judgement by North White, on Flickr "Lifting off in 3, 2, 1..." Judgement by North White, on Flickr *Whoosh!* Judgement by North White, on Flickr FIN Hope you liked this week's build. C&C appreciated. Do not judge the car, it was used in a previous build. Quote
LucasLaughing Posted February 9, 2017 Posted February 9, 2017 LOL, I liked the dialogue on this one, especially the bit about tenure, and the exchange between the captain and Rusty. That's a cool ship, too - you have some nice angles going on and I like the side turrets. My main suggestion would be to fill some of the gaps - the one on the back is a bit distracting. Also, it might look nice if you added more tiles to the sides - not the whole thing, but maybe just a row or two, like you have over the cockpit. Overall, though, I like it! Quote
Andromedas Gates Posted February 19, 2017 Posted February 19, 2017 The judges awarded you 4 points. Quote
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