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After the battle at the waterfall Magnus took the wolf back to it's home town of Necropolis.

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When he arrived he was asked to go to the town walls by two guards and he did so without questioning. When Magnus arrived at the wall he came face to face with the leader of the Necrolites also his main enemy.

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The figure glanced at Magnus then he lowered his hood revealing the face of Magnus' enemy. "You looked surprised Magnus, did you think that I was a human?"

"What are you?" Magnus asked trying to figure out what he was looking at.

"I am a spirit and I have merged myself to this man so I can have a body again.

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Then without saying a word the spirit left the man's body and merged with Magnus. "Now I have more power than I have ever imagined people will now tremble under the Necrolites and Magnus lord of the Spirits."

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OOC I hope you enjoyed the build and the story this is a continuation of Magnus' story leading up to the next challenge. The first picture was taken about three months ago and I decided to add another scene to the story.

C + C welcome.

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Nice progression of the story - one wonders what will happen next!

I rather like your wall technique. It makes for a low sturdy wall, which I am sure will be very hard to penetrate with siege weapons! Of course, the drawback is, that it is easier to climb by the enemy, but they will be at a big disadvantage while doing so. :thumbup:

I too like the crenelations, but think some tiles on the top of the wall might improve the overall look of it. :classic:

Further, I would suggest looking for a better background for your photos, as it is a bit disturbing :classic:

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Nice progression of the story - one wonders what will happen next!

I rather like your wall technique. It makes for a low sturdy wall, which I am sure will be very hard to penetrate with siege weapons! Of course, the drawback is, that it is easier to climb by the enemy, but they will be at a big disadvantage while doing so. :thumbup:

I too like the crenelations, but think some tiles on the top of the wall might improve the overall look of it. :classic:

Further, I would suggest looking for a better background for your photos, as it is a bit disturbing :classic:

Bregir is very good at voicing my opinion

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