Magnus and the dead.

[the lego dwarf]

Lord Magnus found himself wandering up to a door in a mountain when a warrior clad in black armour opened the door.

" Who dares enter the domain of Ashcroft?"

" My name is Magnus I do not wish to pick a fight but I seem to have stumbled across your home."

The warrior gazed at Magnus as if he recognised him.

" How does one just stumble across a dead mans home which is located in the most dangerous part of Nocturnus?"

" Well I must have taken a wrong turn at some point and eventually came here."

The warrior still looking at Magnus when suddenly something clicked in the dead mans mind.

" I am sorry for being so rude Magnus i should have recognised you sooner.

With that the man turned and shut the door and left Magnus out on the hill.

Edited September 8, 2014 by the lego dwarf

[Lord Vladivus]

That's a cool axe the black knight is holding!

[LordDan]

Yeah, neat axe! I wonder why he just turned around and left.

Edited September 8, 2014 by LordDan

[Scaevola]

Nice start, though the walls are very flat and plain. Try adding some depth, color, and piece variations. The sign is a little out of place, but nice work with the figs

[robuko]

Great story! The axe is very nicely built. The construction of the building is rather simple and plain.

[de Gothia]

Great story and the moc is looking promising. I know that brick limitatons can be frustrating... But the whole thing looks rather unfinished to me... There are gaps (windows?) and the bricks are not connected properly.

Try to take some photos showing the whole moc, right now the pic is cut off in the corners. Do not use the flash, go outdside on a cloudy day instead

I hope you take my critcism in the right way. I hope to see you develop your moccing skills and I just want to help you on the way!

[the lego dwarf]

That's a cool axe the black knight is holding!

Thanks

Yeah, neat axe! I wonder why he just turned around and left.

You will have to wait as all of this will be leading up to something big.

Nice start, though the walls are very flat and plain. Try adding some depth, color, and piece variations. The sign is a little out of place, but nice work with the figs

The sign is also going to appear more in mocs as it also ties up with something big

[BrickCurve]

You did a nice job on the axe, though I would recommend a white or black background and a different angle for the photography.

[soccerkid6]

Cool axe design Your wall could use some work, even just making sure to firmly attach all the bricks would help. Some pillars or arches in the design would look good too