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TOR III Entry (R3): Diary of a Wimpy Redcoat


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16 replies to this topic  – Started by Esurient , Mar 16 2013 08:31 PM

#1 Esurient

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Posted 16 March 2013 - 08:31 PM

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My final entry for TORIII Round 3!
Good luck everyone and enjoy! :classic:

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May the best Bluecoat win! :classic:

Edited by Esurient, 30 March 2013 - 02:00 AM.

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#2 Brig. Brick

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Posted 16 March 2013 - 08:47 PM

nice entry! very good edition too!

but, I feel that a this this redcoat gal has a positive ending!... but there is no good ending for the eternal suffering of being a redcoat!

Edited by Brig. Brick, 16 March 2013 - 08:49 PM.

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#3 Morthen

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Posted 16 March 2013 - 09:20 PM

What is it with you and jelly ??? Do you have a NOT so secret crush on her ooorrrr...?????
Eventhough, quite funny, with all thoose TV-Programs who didn't want her.

No offence but, it felt a bit like it's an redcoat entry.....
But i hope that last part will come true at some point =)

All in all. Nice job, and Good Luck

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#4 Grimmbeard

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Posted 16 March 2013 - 10:01 PM

Yes I have to agree. There cant be a happy ending to Redcoats! :tongue: .

Either way, still a good comic :thumbup:
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#5 Brickington

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Posted 16 March 2013 - 10:09 PM

This actually was a great comic! Every redcoat is succesful no matter what! See, I would love to be a LEGO designer. Are you jealous? :tongue: :laugh:

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Posted 16 March 2013 - 10:44 PM

Very nice and most creative! There's lots of interesting ideas on every panel. :sweet:

Good work on this one :thumbup:
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Posted 17 March 2013 - 01:52 AM

Thanks for all the comments!
I have made some changes to my comic now! :blush:

View PostBrig. Brick, on 16 March 2013 - 08:47 PM, said:

nice entry! very good edition too!
but, I feel that a this this redcoat gal has a positive ending!... but there is no good ending for the eternal suffering of being a redcoat!

View PostGrimmbeard, on 16 March 2013 - 10:01 PM, said:

Yes I have to agree. There cant be a happy ending to Redcoats! :tongue: .
Either way, still a good comic :thumbup:

I was thinking about this and I totally agree with you guys!
Redcoats should never have a happy ending!

View PostMorthen, on 16 March 2013 - 09:20 PM, said:

What is it with you and jelly ??? Do you have a NOT so secret crush on her ooorrrr...?????
Eventhough, quite funny, with all thoose TV-Programs who didn't want her.
No offence but, it felt a bit like it's an redcoat entry.....
But i hope that last part will come true at some point =)
All in all. Nice job, and Good Luck

There is nothing personal about this, so don't get it the wrong way. :laugh:


View PostBrickington, on 16 March 2013 - 10:09 PM, said:

This actually was a great comic! Every redcoat is succesful no matter what! See, I would love to be a LEGO designer. Are you jealous? :tongue: :laugh:

Every fan would dream of being a LEGO designer, of course there are some exceptions now. :wink:

View PostMazin, on 16 March 2013 - 10:44 PM, said:

Very nice and most creative! There's lots of interesting ideas on every panel. :sweet:
Good work on this one :thumbup:

Thanks!

Edited by Esurient, 17 March 2013 - 02:20 AM.

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#8 Brickington

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Posted 17 March 2013 - 02:00 AM

View PostEsurient, on 17 March 2013 - 01:52 AM, said:

Every fan would dream of being a LEGO designer, of course there are some exceptions now. :wink:
But the point is that she became the LEGO designer, not you. maybe you are trying to help out the redcoats because you truly are a redcoat. Just look at your avatar. :tongue: :laugh:

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Posted 17 March 2013 - 03:20 PM

View PostBrickington, on 17 March 2013 - 02:00 AM, said:

But the point is that she became the LEGO designer, not you. maybe you are trying to help out the redcoats because you truly are a redcoat. Just look at your avatar. :tongue: :laugh:
You are not a Redcoat either! :tongue:
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Posted 17 March 2013 - 03:55 PM

View PostEsurient, on 17 March 2013 - 03:20 PM, said:

You are not a Redcoat either! :tongue:
What do you mean? My avatar has red in it! :tongue:

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Posted 17 March 2013 - 05:45 PM

A lot of photoshop there and I know how timeconsuming that can be - if you're not a pro, that is, so well done ... though like in the other entry I miss more brickbuilt stuff. 3/4 photoshopped backgrounds with only figs on it, don't look too LEGOish to me. Well it might work with some more artistic sort of story. Also I'm not a big fan of the anime facial expressions and the black "anger clouds" ...

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Posted 17 March 2013 - 07:33 PM

Wait, now what side are you on ? ah! ok, I she gets fired in teh end because she isn't a bluecoat, ofcourse :sweet: .

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What is it with you and jelly ??? Do you have a NOT so secret crush on her ooorrrr...?????
Should have focused the romance in my comic on them instead of the deck scrubbers :laugh:
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Posted 17 March 2013 - 11:45 PM

Thanks for including me in your comic!
I like the idea of trying out different reality TV shows! :thumbup:
Really realistic! :classic:

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Posted 18 March 2013 - 03:30 AM

Nice editing.  I think you're letting the redcoat in you show.   :wink:

Thanks for including me.  I didn't know I can barf like that.  :laugh:

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Posted 19 March 2013 - 03:46 AM

View PostMorthen, on 16 March 2013 - 09:20 PM, said:

What is it with you and jelly ??? Do you have a NOT so secret crush on her ooorrrr...?????

:hmpf_bad:  Do I read jealousy here? :hmpf_bad:
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Posted 19 March 2013 - 01:57 PM

It's good to see a bit of romance amidst all the fighting, torturing, humiliating and cursing.
After all, it won't be long until we need to shut the RvB thing for a while until the next ToR.

Still, I also really enjoyed all the humiliation in this comic, and of course this ToR isn't completely over yet.
You did a great job here on the editing, and I especially like how you made all the official tv-show logos. Well done!
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Posted 29 March 2013 - 11:40 AM

So funny and diversified story. I especially like your photo editing and special effects!
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