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#1 Kahgarak

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Posted 28 January 2007 - 08:21 PM

Here you can see a quick test movie from my stop motion ''Hold your breath''.

I'd like some comments about the giant Polyp Squid i made.Unlike the baby Squids,who suck life energy out,this big momma simply eats you.
Note the Morak firing an Air bubble at the Squid.

#2 Zaktan of the Shadows

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Posted 28 January 2007 - 08:57 PM

Sorry... but it isn't working

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#3 Capn Kirk 911

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Posted 28 January 2007 - 09:17 PM

View PostZaktan of the Shadows, on Jan 28 2007, 03:57 PM, said:

Sorry... but it isn't working

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Samething happened to me....

#4 Kahgarak

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Posted 28 January 2007 - 09:18 PM

It's fixed.

#5 vahkimetru

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Posted 28 January 2007 - 09:37 PM

Very nice emotions shown by the matoran. Isn't Guhrak a Rahkshi though?

#6 Lord Admiral Helden Ravensdorn

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Posted 28 January 2007 - 10:00 PM

Constructive Critique:

While the animation seemed smooth enough for most of it, I suggest more frames during the action sequences. Honestly, the giant squid attack happened so fast that I had to watch it about 5 times to clearly understand what happened.  Lastly, I'd make the text bigger and put it in its own box below the rest of the animation :)

Lookin' good, man!

#7 Kahgarak

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Posted 29 January 2007 - 07:20 AM

No, Guurahk is a Rahkshi though.

OK,I'll try more frames next time.

#8 GravyTrain

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Posted 29 January 2007 - 07:25 PM

Slow. It. Down. This MUST be done. I can't make head nor tails of what's happening and I can't read the text quick enough! I'm not The Flash! It's especially hard for dyspraxic/dyslexic people who can't read very fast, although I doubt even a normal person could.

Seriously. Slow it down.

Seriously, though.

#9 Zaktan of the Shadows

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Posted 30 January 2007 - 12:49 AM

The was smooth. But it was extremley fast. Cool though.

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#10 Dino_Bot

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Posted 31 January 2007 - 08:10 AM

That was fast.


It was funny when Ghurak was shaking his head.

#11 Kahgarak

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Posted 02 February 2007 - 06:59 PM

I think that my next stop motion will be made tomorrow or the day after that.




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