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MOC: The Great Pit of Carkoon

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#1 A Plastic Infinity

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Posted 14 January 2013 - 04:39 PM

This was going to be my entry, but I decided to do something else.
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Feedback is appreciated, I've worked long and hard on this!

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Posted 14 January 2013 - 04:56 PM

Nice! I've noticed that that round brick technique works very well for putting bricks at angles. Good usage.

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#3 A Plastic Infinity

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Posted 15 January 2013 - 11:52 PM

View PostDraikNova, on 14 January 2013 - 04:56 PM, said:

Nice! I've noticed that that round brick technique works very well for putting bricks at angles. Good usage.
Thanks. This is the first microscale MOC I've done in along time, so it was nice to get my hands "dirty" again.
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Posted 16 January 2013 - 01:49 AM

Very nice!

The sail barge is awesome. it's so tiny! :grin:

Though the block of tan is a bit boring, you could maybe add a bit of brown? dark tan to create some layers?
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#5 Artanis I

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Posted 16 January 2013 - 02:33 AM

Pit & vessels look good, but I agree, a bit more variety in the colour somehow would improve it. Perhaps below the surface. An horizon backdrop would spruce it up too, I think.
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Posted 16 January 2013 - 03:36 AM

View PostSi-MOCs, on 16 January 2013 - 01:49 AM, said:

Very nice!

The sail barge is awesome. it's so tiny! :grin:

Though the block of tan is a bit boring, you could maybe add a bit of brown? dark tan to create some layers?

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Pit & vessels look good, but I agree, a bit more variety in the colour somehow would improve it. Perhaps below the surface. An horizon backdrop would spruce it up too, I think.

Thanks for the feedback!
I'm afraid it won't be used on this because it has already been dismantled and I've forgotten most of the design. D:)
Sorry, but I will take your ideas into consideration when I minibuild again.

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Posted 16 January 2013 - 04:02 AM

No worries. You could still use an image program to add a background to your photo. GIMP is pretty good and free if you don't have one.
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Posted 20 January 2013 - 07:40 PM

great design keep up the great work

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Posted 20 January 2013 - 11:51 PM

View PostM153Ry, on 20 January 2013 - 07:40 PM, said:

great design keep up the great work
Thanks!
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Posted 21 January 2013 - 12:20 AM

Very good MOC! Very nice indeed.

It may be just me, but the Sail Barge looks a little small when compared to the Pit and the Skiff. I think it should be 2 studs longer (but maybe 1 will do the trick) and 1 stud higher. What do you think?
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Posted 21 January 2013 - 01:21 AM

View PostArtifex, on 21 January 2013 - 12:20 AM, said:

Very good MOC! Very nice indeed.

It may be just me, but the Sail Barge looks a little small when compared to the Pit and the Skiff. I think it should be 2 studs longer (but maybe 1 will do the trick) and 1 stud higher. What do you think?
I thought of that too, but was too lazy to fix it. By the way, this is no longer my contest entry, check out my new and final entry HERE!
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