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#1 Brig. Brick

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Posted 03 January 2013 - 04:41 AM


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And the still thinking that ate Lego-beings are funny!



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lucky me, the erase of the extra panels (two photos actually) don't change the story line!

10 panels, islanders topic.... "Dura lex, sed lex" :pir-sad2:

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Posted 03 January 2013 - 04:54 AM

The glorybarrel is hilarious!!!  Nice job even if you are a bluecoat!

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#3 Brig. Brick

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Posted 03 January 2013 - 05:12 AM

View PostCapt. Stabbin, on 03 January 2013 - 04:54 AM, said:

The glorybarrel is hilarious!!!  Nice job even if you are a bluecoat!

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I have to say... you sir, are a respectable foe!.... haha
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Posted 03 January 2013 - 06:30 AM

Good handy work.  Funny in an adult themed comedy kind of way. ;-)

Instead of "it will continue", you can have "more to come".  Good thing for the 10 panel limit, n'est-ce pas?


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Posted 03 January 2013 - 09:46 AM

Isn't there a 10 panel limit? I counted 12 in yours ... It could easily be corrected - 3rd and 4th panel as one, with the crowd backshot beneath the stage. Also the islander telling jokes could be one panel with bubbles coming from each side. Let the officials decide if the comic is acceptable, but I guess being a bluecoat you have some protection :tongue:

Else a very nice comic! The islander sure is pretty funny although the crowd seems a bit unimpressed in the 4th picture ... some more laughter and Bravos should do!

And it's a me in the comic! I know you bluecoats wouldn't have thought of that, but I tell you, we have a much more suitable person in our ranks, that would have gladly stayed in the barrel for the whole week! :grin: (Sorry Purpearljellyblob, I had to, at least I didn't mention you!)

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Posted 03 January 2013 - 10:45 AM

Great entry! Smart to let an islander tell the jokes. You also gave a good view of the average redcoat ship.

However, MstrOfPppts is right, there are too many panels. Please reduce the number to 10.
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Posted 03 January 2013 - 01:07 PM

Great comic! Very funny, especially the barrel! Instead of "it will continue" I'd suggest "but seriously folks..."
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Posted 03 January 2013 - 01:27 PM

View PostMstrOfPppts, on 03 January 2013 - 09:46 AM, said:

And it's a me in the comic! I know you bluecoats wouldn't have thought of that, but I tell you, we have a much more suitable person in our ranks, that would have gladly stayed in the barrel for the whole week! :grin: (Sorry Purpearljellyblob, I had to, at least I didn't mention you!)

I am specialised in managing barrels and ensuring all barrels are in tip top condition.
It would be a miracle for anyone to be able to stay in a barrel for a week without my maintenance! :laugh:
You would be most suited to undertake this task, given that you are highly adaptable and can survive in low light and low oxygen. :tongue:
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Nice comic Brig. Brick! :thumbup: Good job!

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Posted 03 January 2013 - 02:32 PM

I really like the jokes. Nice ideas there.

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Posted 03 January 2013 - 02:40 PM

Extremely funny! :iamded_lol:  I love the glory-barrel! Great comic!

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Posted 03 January 2013 - 03:42 PM

I think you forgot a few things that the blues copied from the reds. For instance, your shakos are an original redcoat design. Plus, our redcoat Admiral has a better sense of fashion than that grubby old governor of yours.

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Posted 03 January 2013 - 04:44 PM

View Postefullner, on 03 January 2013 - 03:42 PM, said:

I think you forgot a few things that the blues copied from the reds. For instance, your shakos are an original redcoat design.

Not sure what you're saying but bluecoats came before redcoats.
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Posted 03 January 2013 - 05:22 PM

View PostGrimmbeard, on 03 January 2013 - 04:44 PM, said:

View Postefullner, on 03 January 2013 - 03:42 PM, said:

I think you forgot a few things that the blues copied from the reds. For instance, your shakos are an original redcoat design. Plus, our redcoat Admiral has a better sense of fashion than that grubby old governor of yours.
Not sure what you're saying but bluecoats came before redcoats.

Yes, Bluecoats were released in 1989 and Redcoats in 1992, so Redcoats copied the Bluecoats.
Very good comic and I was surprised to introduce the islander as being the King of Comedy.
I find this a brilliant idea and I appreciate your scenario. Wonderfully done!

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Posted 03 January 2013 - 06:41 PM

View Postdr_spock, on 03 January 2013 - 06:30 AM, said:

(...)  Good thing for the 10 panel limit, n'est-ce pas?

View PostMstrOfPppts, on 03 January 2013 - 09:46 AM, said:

Isn't there a 10 panel limit? I counted 12 in yours ... It could easily be corrected - 3rd and 4th panel as one, with the crowd backshot beneath the stage. (...)  but I guess being a bluecoat you have some protection :tongue:

View PostAdmiral Croissant, on 03 January 2013 - 10:45 AM, said:

(...) MstrOfPppts is right, there are too many panels. Please reduce the number to 10.
I'm sorry but we do have a few rules to give our members an even chance as much as possible.

done my friends! the law is the law!. In my defense... I tried to follow the storyline, the number of panels, i keep it in mind, but not the number... I made a quick (...and bad :blush: ) calculus of the numbers!... but not with bad intentions! ( :devil:),

Also, it's good to see that, if the redcoats feels some protection from the organisation, well, is not that way! :thumbup:

View PostMstrOfPppts, on 03 January 2013 - 09:46 AM, said:

Else a very nice comic! The islander sure is pretty funny although the crowd seems a bit unimpressed in the 4th picture ... some more laughter and Bravos should do!

in that moment, it could be crowded on the imagen... took your advice, thanks :thumbup:

View PostMstrOfPppts, on 03 January 2013 - 09:46 AM, said:

And it's a me in the comic! I know you bluecoats wouldn't have thought of that, but I tell you, we have a much more suitable person in our ranks, that would have gladly stayed in the barrel for the whole week! :grin: (Sorry Purpearljellyblob, I had to, at least I didn't mention you!)

I have to tell you, I thought of that, but I also remember that all you, redcoats, are so superstitious that you still forbid womens on your boats

View Postefullner, on 03 January 2013 - 03:42 PM, said:

(...) your shakos are an original redcoat design (...)

View Postmoschino, on 03 January 2013 - 05:22 PM, said:

Yes, Bluecoats were released in 1989 and Redcoats in 1992, so Redcoats copied the Bluecoats.

moschino is right, any thing that the redcoats have, was made first for the bluecoats.... epaulettes, shakos, flintlock musket, decorated bicorns... should I continue?.... :tongue: Kalu-ha is right! haha!



View PostPurpearljellyblob, on 03 January 2013 - 01:27 PM, said:

(...) Nice comic Brig. Brick! :thumbup: Good job! (...)

View PostBlackar, on 03 January 2013 - 02:32 PM, said:

I really like the jokes. Nice ideas there.

View PostBrickington, on 03 January 2013 - 02:40 PM, said:

Extremely funny! :iamded_lol:  I love the glory-barrel! Great comic!

View Postmoschino, on 03 January 2013 - 05:22 PM, said:

Very good comic and I was surprised to introduce the islander as being the King of Comedy.
I find this a brilliant idea and I appreciate your scenario. Wonderfully done!



thanks you all! :wink:  :thumbup:

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Posted 03 January 2013 - 07:53 PM

View PostBrig. Brick, on 03 January 2013 - 06:41 PM, said:

in that moment, it could be crowded on the imagen... took your advice, thanks :thumbup:

Ha, it looks better and this time it's legit :wink: But what I had in mind was the 4th image not the 4th panel, so now panel 6 :tongue: There should be some Hahahas - not too big - but the crowd looks bored although the islander is quite funny :grin:

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Posted 03 January 2013 - 10:10 PM

So much Bluecoats *oh2* Very funny entry i giggled at the flagship thingy and the glory barrel finished me  :head_back:

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Posted 03 January 2013 - 10:52 PM

Great take on the theme, that Islander is a star, I LOLed at that glory barrel, nicely done.

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Posted 05 January 2013 - 07:17 PM

View PostMstrOfPppts, on 03 January 2013 - 07:53 PM, said:

(...) There should be some Hahahas - not too big - but the crowd looks bored although the islander is quite funny :grin:

I think that, more than entertain the troops, the "haha's" have to come from you guys, the real spectators!, but, as I tell before, I took your advise on the little modifications, thanks!

View PostAntonio, on 03 January 2013 - 10:10 PM, said:

So much Bluecoats *oh2* Very funny entry i giggled at the flagship thingy and the glory barrel finished me  :head_back:

I hope that many people could see the little details on each panel too, I know many of you realize them!

View PostSebeus I, on 03 January 2013 - 10:52 PM, said:

Great take on the theme, that Islander is a star, I LOLed at that glory barrel, nicely done.

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Posted 06 January 2013 - 01:49 PM

Great entry, even if you are on the other side. The barrel really made me laugh! :laugh:
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Posted 07 January 2013 - 05:01 PM

That was very nice Brig. Brick! Thanx for the tickets btw! :thumbup:  Seats in the first row... wow... I apppreciate that... :thumbup:

Great story altogether. So much effort and lots of details.

Then again there must be a leak in my head, as I have an islander as a tv star ( presenter ) in my upcoming entry too... :laugh: Now Sebeus' thread then this... We bluecoats really have a lot in common. Wonder if I should post it in this situation, but I don't wanna kill off something I did spend some time on...
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Posted 08 January 2013 - 01:56 AM

That is a great comic! Always nice to see me sitting at the front row, eager to listen to more Redcoats' embarrassing stories. :wink:
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Posted 09 January 2013 - 01:23 AM

View PostMazin, on 07 January 2013 - 05:01 PM, said:

(...) Thanx for the tickets btw! :thumbup:  Seats in the first row... wow... I apppreciate that... :thumbup:

I have to say... you bring the food! haha :moar:

View PostMazin, on 07 January 2013 - 05:01 PM, said:

Then again there must be a leak in my head, as I have an islander as a tv star ( presenter ) in my upcoming entry too... :laugh: Now Sebeus' thread then this... We bluecoats really have a lot in common. Wonder if I should post it in this situation, but I don't wanna kill off something I did spend some time on...

I have to say, I had an idea like yours, but you post it first!... the RvB in Todays news... so I had to change even the scheme I had made it...  Yawmoth is my eyewitness. That delayed my official entry a couple of weeks, but well... the las TOR, all the extra comics or comments where made it on the headquarters, not the "RVB topics", but also, in that time, it doesn't exist the panels for each side, or the (unused yet) ranks


View PostMazin, on 07 January 2013 - 07:00 PM, said:

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Have a question... Is it possible to write down which avatars can be seen in which comic somewhere? Or simple "credits" on the very bottom of each entry? There were some doubts about who is who in some comics, and it's always nice to find own avatar in another story :sweet:  
I'm gonna make small credits in my entries anyway :sweet:

One of the most interesting thing on the entry is try to guess which avatar is on the comic... of course, some avatars are more easy to recognize... just look at the details!

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