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ToR III Entry Round 1 - Islander feast


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15 replies to this topic  – Started by Capt. Stabbin , Jan 01 2013 08:04 PM

#1 Capt. Stabbin

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Posted 01 January 2013 - 08:04 PM


Here is my entry for round 1, hope you like it.  I'm keeping with the Redcoat cannibal theme.  This is also the first comic I have ever made, so it is still a learning process for me.  ENJOY!



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#2 Sir E Fullner

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Posted 02 January 2013 - 12:00 AM

Even though it's your first comic, it's pretty good. Although, I believe you forgot the bit where you cut off the reproductive organs on the blues...oh wait, there's nothing to cut off there. Oh well, it's great!

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Posted 02 January 2013 - 01:58 AM

Great comic! I see bluecoats date mice! :laugh:

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Posted 02 January 2013 - 02:11 AM

Nice work on your first comic.   The iPhone takes pretty good pictures.

Based on the speech bubble, it appears that the bluecoat is the rat's girlfriend.   Even funnier.   :laugh:

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Posted 02 January 2013 - 04:05 AM

View Postdr_spock, on 02 January 2013 - 02:11 AM, said:

The iPhone takes pretty good pictures.

How did you know I took the pictures with my iphone?

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Posted 02 January 2013 - 05:58 AM

Nice comic, although I can see in the 5th panel that those islanders got a little too "slaphappy" and knocked out a redcoat and a flag too. Either that or that redcoat was sleeping on the job and dropped the flag (what more can be expected out of you guys?).

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Posted 02 January 2013 - 08:51 AM

The images are a bit grainy and the 3rd one is not focused, but it's a decent comic anyway. I like the skeleton joke - Happens all the time :laugh:

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Posted 02 January 2013 - 04:17 PM

I have to agree that the tenderizing process is the most funny part.
Well done, it looks very good for a first comic.

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Posted 03 January 2013 - 05:14 AM

View Postefullner, on 02 January 2013 - 12:00 AM, said:

I believe you forgot the bit where you cut off the reproductive organs on the blues

Even with a magnifying glass they would be very hard to see!

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Posted 03 January 2013 - 05:23 AM

typically of the redcoats manners, you let the islanders made all the work!

I have to ask... what happen to your troop on the 5th panel?

View PostMstrOfPppts, on 02 January 2013 - 08:51 AM, said:

The images are a bit grainy (...)

besides any side you are.... or the pirates you have to fight... I think we have a common enemy.... the camera!, so, let's not focus on that!
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Posted 03 January 2013 - 05:31 AM

View PostBrig. Brick, on 03 January 2013 - 05:23 AM, said:

I have to ask... what happen to your troop on the 5th pane

It's just supposed to have just the islanders in it.  The flag in the background, I did not even realize it was there until I had already posted my entry.

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Posted 03 January 2013 - 05:59 AM

View PostCapt. Stabbin, on 03 January 2013 - 05:31 AM, said:

It's just supposed to have just the islanders in it.  The flag in the background, I did not even realize it was there until I had already posted my entry.

:laugh:  details.... details! :laugh:
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Posted 03 January 2013 - 06:39 AM

View PostCapt. Stabbin, on 02 January 2013 - 04:05 AM, said:



How did you know I took the pictures with my iphone?

Redcoats know everything.  Actually it is in the EXIF info of the image files.







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Posted 03 January 2013 - 09:25 AM

View Postdr_spock, on 03 January 2013 - 06:39 AM, said:

Redcoats know everything.  Actually it is in the EXIF info of the image files.

Which bluecoat would have thought of that?! Now who called our ropemaker stupid?

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Posted 03 January 2013 - 01:30 PM

Great work! Now I need to construct more barrels to store these extra treasures! :wub:

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Posted 03 January 2013 - 10:49 PM

Nicely done, I wonder who those gods are, they must be colorblind :tongue: .




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