Posted 01 September 2012 - 05:55 PM
Please excuse the extremely poor photo quality. My camera is very old and it was a cloudy and rainy day, no good light.
Feel free to comment!
Posted 01 September 2012 - 06:22 PM
You have a lot of nice details and the main house looks good and can definatley see the influence from the guide. .
the field looks good too but I think the barn could use some work. the end gables could use soemthing (perhaps extend the roof out one stud and add a 1x brick on the end. another suggest would be to give your landscape some elevation. it looks a bit flat. maybe put hte house or the barn on a small hill (really only need to one brick or so high) it will give your guild another dimention.
One final suggestion on the photos is to give us a few more overviews from different angles
Details really make a MOC and you have a lot of nice ones (the wheel, barrels, good figure selection)
Overall a good job cant wait to see what you have up next
Posted 01 September 2012 - 07:06 PM
The little lantern works very well too
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Posted 01 September 2012 - 07:28 PM
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Posted 01 September 2012 - 09:50 PM
While brushing my teeth (bathroom is still the place of the best ideas :D) an idea came to my mind that could really improve the MOC. I think I will remove the barn. Instead I will put a smaller hut or just a roof and some pillars as a storage place with a workbench. I think I will replace the cows with a well. Fence and gate are great ideas, I have to see if I have the parts for it. I will also improve the landscape and raise the left part of the MOC about a brick's height. Behind the new, smaller warehouse ground will raise even more and a BIG tree will set a clearly defined background. Maybe the weeping willow from the guide...
Tell me what you think and if you have more ideas. I had put a lot of effort in this about two months ago. Did the house and the paths. During summer I wasn't home a lot and today I finished the MOC, I wanted to get it online, but maybe I was a little bit too fast..
Posted 01 September 2012 - 10:04 PM
I think the workshop idea is a good one. you could add a workbench maybe some firewood stacked up.
I don't mind the cows, but adding the fence would be good. I like DC fences, I've done a version of a stone fence in a couple of my builds something like that might work if you have some more 1x1 round plates.
another tree will definitely add to the Availonian vibe
Posted 02 September 2012 - 05:36 PM
I love your corn, simple yet original. Overall, a very charming scene.
Good job, and keep it up!
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