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#1 Darkdragon

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Posted 27 August 2012 - 03:25 AM

Just a small 4-panel comic with no words. Thanks for looking! :classic:


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#2 Cecilie

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Posted 27 August 2012 - 12:24 PM

Haha, funny :laugh:

And great photography too, blurring out the background until the last pane. Only thing I would have changed is to have the smiling people in the background look in a slightly different direction than at the unfolding scene, they look kind of creepy smiling at that :tongue:.
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Posted 27 August 2012 - 05:15 PM

:laugh: Awesome comic! You're making me want to get off my butt and make some comics of my own! :tongue:

Which minifig is that torso from? The one with the LEGO brick on the hoodie...

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#4 Darkdragon

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Posted 28 August 2012 - 02:32 AM

View PostCecilie, on 27 August 2012 - 12:24 PM, said:

Haha, funny :laugh:
Thanks Cecilie!  I reshot the last frame tonight, you are right about the smiles. Now I think it works much better. :classic:

View Postpurpleparadox, on 27 August 2012 - 05:15 PM, said:

:laugh: Awesome comic! You're making me want to get off my butt and make some comics of my own! :tongue:

Which minifig is that torso from? The one with the LEGO brick on the hoodie...
Yes, you should! Making comics is totally fun. Well any small minifig scenes are fun to me, not everything hast be huge megabuilds. :wink:

That torso is from the 2012 Event Exclusive Set. It's available throughout USA and CAN this year at various LEGO Store events - no idea on the rest of the world.

#5 Cecilie

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Posted 28 August 2012 - 06:16 AM

View Postdarkdragon, on 28 August 2012 - 02:32 AM, said:

Thanks Cecilie!  I reshot the last frame tonight, you are right about the smiles. Now I think it works much better. :classic:

Yes, much better! Now it's more apparent that the shocked kid is the only one noticing what's going on. :sweet:
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#6 Darkdragon

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Posted 31 August 2012 - 03:34 AM

View PostCecilie, on 28 August 2012 - 06:16 AM, said:

Yes, much better! Now it's more apparent that the shocked kid is the only one noticing what's going on. :sweet:
Thanks!  :thumbup:

#7 Zepher

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Posted 31 August 2012 - 05:24 AM

Very funny!  It's a four page comic without words and a twist, while still being funny.  That's pretty impressive story-telling!   :thumbup:

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#8 Darkdragon

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Posted 31 August 2012 - 07:35 PM

View PostZepher, on 31 August 2012 - 05:24 AM, said:

Very funny!  It's a four page comic without words and a twist, while still being funny.  That's pretty impressive story-telling!   :thumbup:
Thanks Zepher!  Glad you found it funny and understood what was happening. Working without word bubbles is a real challenge and it's nice to know it worked. :wink:

#9 Alasdair Ryan

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Posted 01 September 2012 - 03:05 PM

Very nice but I would of beat up the camera crew too as nobody like the press these days.........
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Posted 11 March 2014 - 11:29 PM

Very cool! Great design and high quality.



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