Soldiers are coming home
Posted 23 June 2012 - 05:45 PM
Posted 23 June 2012 - 06:15 PM
Some windows on the big white house on the right maybe? A little tip, when I build houses that are "cut-off" I usally make them more narrow and closer to the moc´s border. That way, the roofs don´t get big gap on top!
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Posted 23 June 2012 - 09:37 PM
The thatched roof works nicely too, I think this is my favorite build of yours so far!
I agree that the gaps in the roofs are distracting though
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Posted 24 June 2012 - 05:50 AM
Posted 24 June 2012 - 06:35 AM
although it is sad I'm glad you put the child crying for his fallen father, it adds a bit of realism to it as not every soldier will come home safe and sound as many MOCs portray it to be so. also good work on carrying on the story!
keep it up!
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