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#1 Styrbjorn

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Posted 23 June 2012 - 05:41 PM

My next bulding. Sorry for bad pictures.
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Where's dad?!?!

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C&c is welcome :classic:
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#2 turtleman2020

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Posted 23 June 2012 - 05:45 PM

There's definetly some nice angles in this, but I think the roofs need to cover the whole house. The sideways log bricks look really cool so does the waterfowl.

#3 de Gothia

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Posted 23 June 2012 - 06:15 PM

Some very nice details and feelings involved in the moc! Well done!

Some windows on the big white house on the right maybe? A little tip, when I build houses that are "cut-off" I usally make them more narrow and closer to the moc´s border. That way, the roofs don´t get big gap on top!

But you are really advancing Styrbjorn!

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#4 soccerkid6

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Posted 23 June 2012 - 09:37 PM

Good job on all the angles  :thumbup:
The thatched roof works nicely too, I think this is my favorite build of yours so far!
I agree that the gaps in the roofs are distracting though
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Posted 23 June 2012 - 10:15 PM

This shutter is great  :thumbup:

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#6 Styrbjorn

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Posted 24 June 2012 - 05:50 AM

Thx! I have no more pieces to more roof so thats why... I can't buy pieces now because first is it lotr and then is it my frigate and I have never buyed on BL so that's a problem... :blush:
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#7 Legonardo

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Posted 24 June 2012 - 06:35 AM

Cool MOC, you are improving more with every build.
although it is sad I'm glad you put the child crying for his fallen father, it adds a bit of realism to it as not every soldier will come home safe and sound as many MOCs portray it to be so. also good work on carrying on the story!
keep it up!
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