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#1 optimus99

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Posted 16 May 2012 - 07:45 PM

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this is the part of the droid factory where they get heads and arms enjoy!

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this is a stopmotion of a droid being built hope you like it.


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#2 Oky

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Posted 16 May 2012 - 08:18 PM

Not bad, but I think it could use more detail. You could add some greeble on the outside of the assembly line. Also, I believe the heads are the last part that are attached to the droids.

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Posted 16 May 2012 - 08:21 PM

Thanks for the tips. In my next moc I will add more detail.

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Posted 16 May 2012 - 08:45 PM

Nice going...I would love to see a wall or two on this and maybe more of the production line before this stage.

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Posted 16 May 2012 - 09:11 PM

Looks nice, but way too small. Add a couple more assembly lines, and stretch out the droid building process, and you'll be golden!

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#6 Bilbo Baggins

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Posted 16 May 2012 - 11:39 PM

It is great, you only need to make it bigger to become awesome.

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Posted 17 May 2012 - 12:00 AM

The setup of the assembly line is great, but I agree with the others about adding more detail. :classic:

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Posted 17 May 2012 - 01:45 AM

A nice little vig. Though, I agree, more drones would make it better. And where's C-3PO? :laugh:
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#9 optimus99

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Posted 17 May 2012 - 01:58 AM

Hey guys good news, I will be putting up Pictures of a more detailed MOC tomorrow and a surprise!

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Posted 17 May 2012 - 04:45 PM

I updated the post with new images and a stopmotion!

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Posted 17 May 2012 - 08:11 PM

Very nice update! :thumbup:  The greeble adds a lot to the scene, and I like the added points of articulation for the robot arms and the racks of unused droid parts. The stopmotion is funny too, mainly because the arms of the droid are attached upside down. :tongue:

#12 optimus99

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Posted 17 May 2012 - 08:57 PM

Thanks, I'm glad you like it.

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Posted 17 May 2012 - 09:16 PM

Nice update! The printed pieces add much more to the set! Now, can you get rid of that dust on the pieces? It's driving my OCD up!  :tongue:

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Posted 17 May 2012 - 10:09 PM

Not bad, not bad at all. I like that you included a stop motion! Maybe you could add a few more frames to the video though, just so it goes smoother.

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Posted 17 May 2012 - 11:03 PM

Very cool! The video is great!  :thumbup:
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Posted 18 May 2012 - 10:28 PM

I'm glad you all like My new version.




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