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#1 C.J.Cutrone9

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Posted 28 February 2012 - 10:51 PM

Allright, after seeing Deref's comic I decided to try my hand (again) at making a comic type deal.

So Here it is, no photoshop was done, and please excuse any blurry pictures, I tried my best to delete the blurry ones but might have missed a few.

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Joseph: You have been selected for this task because you are the best fighters in Avalonia's army under my command. I am in need of a second in command and have a challange to see who is worthy to take that place. In that cave is a drow, a wanted drow. It has been charged with murder and has been thrown in here. If you wish to be second in command, you will go in there, with no weapons, and kill him.

Joseph pauses to give the men some time to think.

Joseph: Once you've killed him bring his body out, if no one kills him then he is free to go. Any volunteers?

None of the soldiers dared to move nore even breath, fighting a drow, accused of murder, in hand-to-hand combat, in a cave was suicide. Then one bold elf stepped forward and spoke.

Narra: Sir, I am willing to go, but may I have a light?

Jospeh: Your request is granted.

With a torch in his hand, a head full of swirling thoughts, and his heart pounding faster than ever before, Narra slowly entered the cave. Knowing, he would never see the light of day again.

Once inside, everything seemed to move, the stalagmites and stalagtites, both made the cave look like a mouth, ready to chew and spit him out. Gulping, Narra moved on. How would he defeat the drow, or how would he even find him? were the 2 questions that wirrled through his head... Then it came to him.

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Narra:Drow!, come out from your location, I have orders to escort you to the mouth of the cave were you will be released.

There was silence, had the drow heard him? Or more importantly, did he believe him? Just as he was about to shout out again a deep and dark voice filled the air, almost making Narra drop the torch and collapse.

Drow: Who are you? And why am I to be released?

Narra: I am a soldier in the Avalonian army, and you are to be released because no one was brave enough to accept our commander's challenge and come to fight you with no weapon. So he is keeping his word an letting you go.

Drow: Why don't I just kill you and then leave? I can find my way out just like you can.

Narra: If you kill me, and you leave the mouth of the cave without me, you will be killed by the group of soldiers ready to escort you out of Avalonia.

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Drow: Fine then, lead the way.

The voice had come from behind him! Quickly Narra turned around to face the drow. His face was wrapped in a clothlike material, and on top of that was a hood. He wore chain armor and looked all the part of a murderer.

Drow: I said lead the way.

Narra: No offense, but I'd rather be behind you.... Just given your record.

Drow: Fine..... (Whisper) stupid elf.

Narra began thinking to himself, when would he execute his plan? And how would he drag this drow out of the cave? He looked heavy.... Then Narra stopped thinking and attacked.

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Dropping the torch, he grabbed the drow and slammed him, head first, into the cave wall. This killed the drow instantly, but left Narra with no way of seeing... Eventually another soldier came, ready to fight the drow and assuming Narra was killed. When he saw Narra, he helped him drag the drow out. Once out, Narra told the commander how he had killed the drow and the commander told Narra. to follow him.

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Joseph: You did well Narra, you are both courageous and wise. You found the only way to kill the drow, was to promise him something he wanted, and then to kill him once he was found.

Narra: Thank you sir.

Joseph: You are going to need both the skills you showed today. The next assignment we have, was given to us by Artorious Rex.

Narra was supprised but kept silent expecting to hear more, but there was nothing more.

Narra: What is it?

Joseph:You will find out in good time.



END OF PART 1.


C&C is welcome and appreciated.

Edited by C.J.Cutrone9, 28 February 2012 - 10:52 PM.

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#2 Niku

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Posted 28 February 2012 - 11:02 PM

Nice introduction, I am sure Angeli will appreciate this story.  :devil:
I like Narra too.
Also how you made the effect for the torch to be as on fire?

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#3 C.J.Cutrone9

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Posted 29 February 2012 - 12:52 AM

View PostNiku, on 28 February 2012 - 11:02 PM, said:

Nice introduction, I am sure Angeli will appreciate this story.  :devil:
I like Narra too.
Also how you made the effect for the torch to be as on fire?

DK. Brown telescope piece, fire element stuck in the smaller end, and a lifelites shining upward through the larger end.
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#4 Captain BeerBeard

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Posted 01 March 2012 - 08:08 AM

Not bad. :thumbup: I like the first pic but wish there was a few more. How long until part two and can you post a pic of this light device? The effect was really cool and would be much appreciated if you post a pic. :wink:
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#5 C.J.Cutrone9

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Posted 01 March 2012 - 11:04 PM

View PostCaptain BeerBeard, on 01 March 2012 - 08:08 AM, said:

Not bad. :thumbup: I like the first pic but wish there was a few more. How long until part two and can you post a pic of this light device? The effect was really cool and would be much appreciated if you post a pic. :wink:


Thank you.

I am uploading part 2 now.

I will try and remember to upload the lighting thing later.
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