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#1 Dika59


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Posted 11 January 2012 - 05:12 PM

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Hi ! i present you my first diorama on the mustafar planet,but he's not totally finish.

Here is the river of volcan and rocks

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Here is Obi Wan Kenobi on the little platform
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Here is Anakin Skywalker on a droid.
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I hate You !!!!! A Legendary scene...
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sorry if it's poorly written, I'm french

#2 JackJonespaw


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Posted 11 January 2012 - 10:34 PM

View PostDika59, on 11 January 2012 - 05:12 PM, said:

Here is Obi Wan Kenobi on the little platform
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Since when does Kenobi have a brown beard?

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#3 Eskallon


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Posted 11 January 2012 - 11:59 PM

Nice little Diorama, I especially liked the two little platforms and I think they really enhanced the scene. :thumbup:

As some constructive criticism, I would suggest you cover up the holes between the rocks, they were interesting but the holes distracted me.

#4 Ritz Brick

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Posted 12 January 2012 - 07:21 AM

I like the way you've used plates to create the rocks, but maybe try to cover up the squareness of the last rock. Make it look a bit more natural.
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Posted 12 January 2012 - 09:28 AM

Looks promising, one thing though, I would change both of the hairpieces.
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Posted 12 January 2012 - 04:31 PM

I like the effect of the lava and the burning Ana/Darth  :sweet:

Perhaps you can use some dark grey and black dots to make at least the bottom of the slope going into the lava look more coal like?

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