Kai NRG, on 25 July 2012 - 08:44 PM, said:
I, Ageven Deraim, guarantee my allegiance to the Kaliphlin. My men and I will be honored to fight for the South.
I have traveled for many months, coming from across the Great Southern Ocean in a raft, sailing out of sight of land, seeing nothing but blue, illumined by the hottest, most brilliant sun I had ever imagined. I have seen many sights, but none so great as the sight of mountains, once again, rising out of the horizon, as we finally drifted into sight of land. I first landed upon one of the outlying islands, sending on two of my followers to try to see what lie ahead. They brought back a tale far better than any I had imagined: a rich, desert land, scarcely populated, but flowing with all the wealth of an empire. I knew than that we had reached Kaliphlin, the province of Historica that contained some of the greatest riches imaginable. I sailed on, reaching finally one of the outermost borders, from whence I had my scribe sketch a map, circling the portion where I wish to make my home. If none of my fellow Guild members object, or have already taken up their base here, I would ask to build my home in the circled island/peninsula:
Kaliphlin Map by
gid617, on Flickr
(It is indeed true that red would have been the preferred color, however, all the brushes that I have had the fortune to see have always been covered with green - a most unfortunate circumstance.)
Edit:
Sig-fig added.
Kai NRG, on 28 July 2012 - 04:48 PM, said:
Added some mountains into the background. Also, there's more sand to the sand dune.
Any more ideas (the mountains are actually not directly behind the cliffs, FYI)? I'm thinking it might be a good idea to move the volcano to the other side.

Welcome Ageven Deraim to Kaliphlin! You have chosen a well-populated area of the guild to build in - you certainly will have plenty of neighbours. (and allies!)
That's a great start on your challenge entry too - and btw, a nice idea to make it all microscale.

I agree with Mikel that the foreground might need a bit of contouring so that it doesn't appear so flat. I do think the mountains in the background work well though.
Kayne, on 29 July 2012 - 12:18 AM, said:
My entry for challenge 4 is posted now...here is a sneak peak
My entry
We had a special visitor to the town at the time of the attack as well. Sorry to anyone else, but he was the only sigfig I had all the parts to make!
Really great entry Kayne, and well done you for being orginised enough not to leave it to the last minute! (Unlike me...) Thanks for the invite to your fair province - Starbowl looks to be a well-built city, and i'm sure it will recover from this latest attack.
Btw, i love your ship Mikel! Your entry looks like it's going to be massive...
Ok, so it's not Monday anymore (where i live anyway), but i still want to post this for *drumroll* Microscale Monday!

Which should totally be a thing. I haven't made a topic for this yet as i am now off to the land of nod, although i may do so later..
Anyway, it's the causeway garrison at the head of the landbridge into Peregrinus. It might just give you a clue as to where my challenge 4 entry will be based.
Happy building everyone!