I dont want to bring this post back to the top but as no one has comment I though I might.
Hay San not too bad on the build but need improvement. If you check out MacLane's filcker account My link
and check out his building style you may get a few ideas. He needs a nose and the ears on the back of the head. I like the right hand with the glove nice touch.
Thought I would give a bit of encouragement so you keep bricking, the more you build the better you get.