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#1 The Caped Crusader

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Posted 10 May 2011 - 11:23 AM

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Hey guys , guess who 's back ! I 've built a new moc , and can't wait to share it ! So without further delay , here it is ! !

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Enjoy , and please comment !

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#2 Rook

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Posted 10 May 2011 - 02:49 PM

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MOC doesn't feel wide enough and wall looks like you stopped building it half through.  :cry_sad: Other then that, very nice.

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#3 Brickdoctor

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Posted 10 May 2011 - 05:51 PM

View PostRook, on 10 May 2011 - 02:49 PM, said:

MOC doesn't feel wide enough and wall looks like you stopped building it half through.  :cry_sad: Other then that, very nice.
I agree. What little you've done is very nice; the walls are well-greebled. But the wall definitely needs to get taller and possible attach to a ceiling.

#4 The Caped Crusader

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Posted 10 May 2011 - 05:51 PM

@ Rook : Thanks for the comment Rook , I will try to insert the pictures in a moment , but before that , about your comments on the moc itself , I wasn't aiming for it to be big , as I lack time these days . The walls aren't finished because I can't decide between just using  1x2's onto the bley ... eem slopes I think they 're called ... or using tiles above the black greebled plates too ( I hope that you get it , I didn't describe it really well , as my English aren't that good , but you are experinced enough to understand ) . Btw thanks for being a friend again !

@ Doc :Thanks for your comment , it seems like two of the best builders I know request the same thing , now I just HAVE TO
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Posted 10 May 2011 - 08:26 PM

View PostRook, on 10 May 2011 - 02:49 PM, said:

Google is your friend.

http://www.google.ca...1e450cc006613d1

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MOC doesn't feel wide enough and wall looks like you stopped building it half through.  :cry_sad: Other then that, very nice.

Yeah, even 1x2 tiles at least.
I actually like the length, it gives it a linear "hallway" feel. But troopmaker can decide  :classic:
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Posted 10 May 2011 - 09:10 PM

Nice MOC. I agree with the others that the wall doesnt seem finished to me!

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Posted 10 May 2011 - 09:51 PM

Nice MOC Troopermaker, the technique for the greebled wall looks pretty nice and I think it would look very impressive on a larger MOC.  And I also agree that you could add a little more hight to the walls to give them a more finished look.

Great job :thumbup:
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Posted 11 May 2011 - 12:00 AM

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Have you considered expanding this into a full corridor?

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Posted 11 May 2011 - 01:35 AM

Very nice build, I really like the greebling details even for such a small vig. I'd also love to see this expanded to a larger one. Good job Troopmaker! :thumbup:

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#10 The Caped Crusader

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Posted 11 May 2011 - 10:35 AM

Thanks for your comments everyone ! Your requests leave me no other choise than expanding the walls , I will start doing it right now actually . Finally , special thanks to KDM and Fallen Angel for deeplinking the pictures ! Keep the comments up !

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Posted 13 May 2011 - 08:47 AM

View PostBrickdoctor, on 10 May 2011 - 05:51 PM, said:

I agree. What little you've done is very nice; the walls are well-greebled. But the wall definitely needs to get taller and possible attach to a ceiling.
Indeed.
It's a great job considering the size.
Making the wall higher would improve the overall impression a lot.

View PostTroopmaker, on 11 May 2011 - 10:35 AM, said:

Thanks for your comments everyone ! Your requests leave me no other choise than expanding the walls , I will start doing it right now actually . Finally , special thanks to KDM and Fallen Angel for deeplinking the pictures ! Keep the comments up !
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Posted 13 May 2011 - 09:57 AM

Nice MOC 'Troopmaker', true the wall isn't high enough....but still great detailing and one messed up clanker ! :laugh:
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#13 The Caped Crusader

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Posted 13 May 2011 - 01:14 PM

Thanks for the comments guys , I may post the larger moc today , it's almost done , but I dont really know if I will have the time to

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#14 The Caped Crusader

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Posted 01 June 2011 - 09:34 AM

Hey guys , I finished the moc ( nothing special , just added those tiles on the top ), here's the final version : http://www.flickr.co.../in/photostream

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Posted 01 June 2011 - 10:10 AM

Now that looks even better, may the brick be with you 'Troopmaker' ! :grin:

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Posted 01 June 2011 - 10:40 AM

It's amazing how much a few tiles make a good MOC become a realy good MOC good job Troopmaker :thumbup:.
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Posted 01 June 2011 - 11:09 AM

Nice job indeed!  :thumbup:

And as the others already said; an expanded version of this would be awesome.

#18 The Caped Crusader

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Posted 01 June 2011 - 11:44 AM

Thanks for your comments , I don't think the changes are important at all , and I wasn't sure if I should post this , but , well , I'm happy that you like it .....

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Posted 01 June 2011 - 12:00 PM

Is this classed as a vignette? Very nice greebling troopmaker. It's surprising how the addition of just a few tiles really finishes this off.  :thumbup:
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Posted 01 June 2011 - 01:06 PM

Oh much better looking! :thumbup: I really like the way you streched the tiles over the top.
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