[MOC] Jedi Patrick Starfighter
Posted 21 April 2011 - 05:57 PM
Here is my first SW creation which I am very proud of, since I dont` have any SW sets.
This heavily armored and armed Starfighters is a brilliance of spaceship technology, but it is so expensive that only one Jedi uses it.
Jedi Patrick. The funniest and most dangerous Jedi living under the sea (and only one living there!).
More images here:
I hope you like it!
And of course, tell me what you think!
Posted 21 April 2011 - 06:03 PM
This is pretty good for your first attempt at SW. I like the basic SNOT construction of the whole thing, and the engines and guns are good. I'm not so sure about the striping on the wings, though. Was it your intention to stripe them or was it because of parts limitations? If it was the former, I think diagonal stripes would really be an improvement; these stripes that go straight out make the ship seem more bulky and more like a really small heavy bomber than an agile starfighter.
Overall, great job on your first attempt; you've got a good base to improve on, and I can't wait to see where you go with this.
Posted 21 April 2011 - 06:06 PM
Edited by Mr. McDuck, 21 April 2011 - 06:06 PM.
Posted 21 April 2011 - 06:08 PM
Posted 21 April 2011 - 06:17 PM
This is a very interesting MOC, I like the thickness of the wings, and the SNOT construction, and the hinge piece at the front is very cleaver.
If the Jedi is aquatic maybe the ship can work in water and space as well (just a suggestion ), I also like the idea of it being a bomber because of its size and amount of amour. The colouring is a little weird but if it is an underwater craft the grey, and white will offer camouflage to it.
All in all great first SW MOC .
Posted 22 April 2011 - 12:27 AM
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Posted 22 April 2011 - 02:32 AM
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