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#1 Butterman

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Posted 12 April 2011 - 03:15 PM

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#2 Mr Man

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Posted 12 April 2011 - 03:32 PM

Its OK Butterman, but it looks a bit too cute to be GG. The arms look to thin to beable to split into four, and the legs are to wide, BUT the head and body are good (apart from being too cute), but not a bad MOC
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#3 Butterman

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Posted 12 April 2011 - 03:44 PM

View PostMr Man, on 12 April 2011 - 03:32 PM, said:

Its OK Butterman, but it looks a bit too cute to be GG. The arms look to thin to beable to split into four, and the legs are to wide, BUT the head and body are good (apart from being too cute), but not a bad MOC

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Posted 12 April 2011 - 04:37 PM

Nice attempt at a GG CubeDude Butterman, though I think it needs a few more details even for a CubeDude, like the additional pair of arms and GG's signature 4 lightsabers. It's a good start and I'm sure you could still improve it further.

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#5 Butterman

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Posted 12 April 2011 - 05:00 PM

Thank you very much!

#6 Brickdoctor

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Posted 12 April 2011 - 07:28 PM

What the previous posters said.

Other than that, I think the torso and legs are too...simplistic for my tastes. The torso doesn't really represent well the look of Grievous's chest. I'd also definitely shorten the legs by a brick to make it match other CubeDudes.

#7 Fuzzylegobricks

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Posted 13 April 2011 - 06:48 AM

I love that you have added the light sabers and the head is just great. If you are doing another version I think you could maybe make the arms a little thicker like stated earlier. The eyes were done greatly too. :classic:
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#8 Butterman

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Posted 13 April 2011 - 11:18 AM

All thanks a lot!

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Posted 13 April 2011 - 04:13 PM

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#10 Oky

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Posted 13 April 2011 - 05:20 PM

I don't know, this kinda looks more like this guy to me:

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The head needs some work, and you're violating a few too many CubeDude rules, I think.

#11 Butterman

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Posted 13 April 2011 - 05:35 PM

Thank you all! This Grievous is now dismantled, but I think his remake.
kyphur, you have a great Grievous.
Oky Wan Kenobi ,My Grievous looks like a droid that probably only the "ears".



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