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#1 Davor

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Posted 04 March 2011 - 05:47 PM

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#2 Brickdoctor

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Posted 04 March 2011 - 06:22 PM

The detailing and shaping you always put into those massive walls you build never fails to impress. :thumbup:

#3 Diaaabo

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Posted 04 March 2011 - 06:31 PM

The scenery looks really good, but it lacks minifigs. Try to add more action with a whole load of clones and droids, maybe even jedi.
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#4 Davor

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Posted 04 March 2011 - 07:07 PM

View PostDiaaabo, on 04 March 2011 - 06:31 PM, said:

The scenery looks really good, but it lacks minifigs. Try to add more action with a whole load of clones and droids, maybe even jedi.

there are 14 minifigs(inc. Mace Windu) and this is really small small diorama...more would be overkill....

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Posted 04 March 2011 - 07:14 PM

Wow that's really great Davor.
I've taken the liberty of deeplinking another picture as putting this into the MOC Index with only a teaser-pic would seem a little far-fetched.
Plus I'd really like to blog this as well :classic:
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#6 Davor

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Posted 04 March 2011 - 07:18 PM

View PostKimT, on 04 March 2011 - 07:14 PM, said:

Wow that's really great Davor.
I've taken the liberty of deeplinking another picture as putting this into the MOC Index with only a teaser-pic would seem a little far-fetched.
Plus I'd really like to blog this as well :classic:

tnx man!!!

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#7 Tom Dickenharry

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Posted 04 March 2011 - 07:24 PM

It allways astounds me the things people make on this forum... I hope now I've joined I can learn to be just as good. Great MOC, but I agree with Diaabo, it needs more action.

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Posted 04 March 2011 - 09:21 PM

Think it looks great as it is, bunches of minifigs don't make scenes better unless the scene calls for it.  I think Lucas has convinced everyone that when theres a battle droid there needs to be hundreds of them.  Love the wall!

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Posted 04 March 2011 - 09:55 PM

The greebling and tiling is nice, but... 48x48 is pretty large, at least by my standards. This MOC is also pretty tall. It's very large, but also somewhat lacking. There's a lot of open floor space that you could fill with troops and scenery, and maybe even to make it especially interesting you could add a second floor.

Still a good MOC, just needs more going on, IMO.

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#10 Davor

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Posted 04 March 2011 - 11:00 PM

This is just a small moc I done today afternoon, no planing, just a 2h of fun. It lacks some things, but it isn`t supposed to be masterpiece.

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Posted 04 March 2011 - 11:21 PM

Looks nice, I like the design; however it looks kind of "empty".
Try adding something like at rt. :classic:
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Posted 05 March 2011 - 01:34 AM

Very nice MOC Davor! That massive wall is really well-done with all those greebling details. But I tend to agree with JB, the ground seems to be too spacious and could've use more details IMO, probably some more troops, downed clones or BDs, rubble, destroyed elements. But I understand the time limitation, for a 2-hour fun build it's already a great MOC. :thumbup:

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Posted 05 March 2011 - 01:39 AM

Woah. I saw the first picture and nearly passed it off as a normal everyday MOC. Then I saw that wall... Posted Image

Well done, Davor. That's an impressive MOC.


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Posted 05 March 2011 - 05:03 PM

Wow! This is fantastic. The towering wall, with interesting building techniques do it for me. I think it could use some vehicles, and minifigs, though. That would make it look more alive, and action packed. I'm assuming this is the kidnapping of palpatine, correct?
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Posted 05 March 2011 - 09:58 PM

Nice MOC Davor.  I have to agree with what everone else is saying.  It needs more action.  Keep up the great work.

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Posted 05 March 2011 - 10:10 PM

Excellent creation 'Davor', nice high walls....but maybe a few more fig's on both sides might help it a little ! :wink:
But still it's very good indeed and may the Sith Brick Be With You ! :grin:

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Posted 05 March 2011 - 11:33 PM

Wow ...very high wall in that picture! *oh2*
I like the first scene with troops behind containers ...it seems so real! :sweet:
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Posted 06 March 2011 - 02:16 AM

Wow.  That wall sure is tall.  Nice detail on it too! :thumbup:   Simple but I do like the effect it has on the overall MOC.




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