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#1 Professor Trelawney

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Posted 25 February 2011 - 11:22 AM

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Hello! This is my mini MOC of my Trade Federation Cruiser/Separatist Dreadnought (Providence-class_carrier/destroyer). Its Small but I am rather proud of it. I will be making another one as the colour scheme is off at the rear end, but I hope you enjoy version 1, Version 2 will be on it's way soon. I didn't want to go with the "trench" colour scheme because I don't have that many blue parts, so i made a normal one,kind of the style of Grievous's ship "the Invisible Hand". this is "trench's" colour scheme as a reference picture. Anyway I hope you enjoy! :classic:

Edit- If any-one read this post and had a few sentence's then sorry because I accidently clicked post half-way through :blush:.
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Arial View-

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Mini Bridge-
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Mini Hanger Area-

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And finally, Mini Engines-

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Thank you for Viewing! :classic: Yay for the Separatist Alliance! :devil:

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#2 Fallenangel

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Posted 25 February 2011 - 11:55 AM

I'm confused... where is it?

By a 'Separatist Dreadnought you are referring to a Providence carrier?

Edited by fallenangel309, 25 February 2011 - 11:55 AM.


#3 Professor Trelawney

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Posted 25 February 2011 - 11:57 AM

Sorry, I clicked "post" accidently, when I wasn't even finished. :blush:

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#4 Professor Flitwick

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Posted 25 February 2011 - 12:33 PM

Looks great, and what's more, it's one of the few ships from TCW series that I recognize! :laugh:

I like the use of the trans-blue round pieces to represent the Deflector shields. :thumbup:

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Sorry, I clicked "post" accidently, when I wasn't even finished. :blush:

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Posted 25 February 2011 - 01:31 PM

Not a bad looking mini CW ship you have there 'Professor Trelawney' - perfect kind of ship that a particular Jedi likes crashing banged up Republic ships into ! :laugh:
Great work and may the Sith brick be with you ! :devil:

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Posted 25 February 2011 - 03:41 PM

View Postfallenangel309, on 25 February 2011 - 11:55 AM, said:

I'm confused... where is it?

By a 'Separatist Dreadnought you are referring to a Providence carrier?
It's the same ship class as the Invisible Hand, This one is non-Neimodian though, while the one grievous flew was.  :classic:


This looks good! I like the shaping and design, the only thing I might recommend is some less yellowed bricks, It would enhance the model as a whole.
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#7 Lord Starkiller

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Posted 25 February 2011 - 05:49 PM

You should of Used a 1X2 Trans Blue Smooth Brick for the Hanger Shields....
Anyway, Nice! I Love the Chopped in Half Seppy Logo at the Back!
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#8 Professor Trelawney

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Posted 25 February 2011 - 06:07 PM

Thanks Guys for your Comments  :tongue:

View PostProfessor Flitwick, on 25 February 2011 - 12:33 PM, said:

Looks great, and what's more, it's one of the few ships from TCW series that I recognize! :laugh:

I like the use of the trans-blue round pieces to represent the Deflector shields. :thumbup:


Thank you Professor Flitwick!, your comments are always appreciated.  :tongue:




View Postlightningtiger, on 25 February 2011 - 01:31 PM, said:

Not a bad looking mini CW ship you have there 'Professor Trelawney' - perfect kind of ship that a particular Jedi likes crashing banged up Republic ships into ! :laugh:
Great work and may the Sith brick be with you ! :devil:

Thank you Lightningtiger!  :laugh: I hope this one doesn't get smashed-up.  :sweet:  


View PostLord Starkiller, on 25 February 2011 - 05:49 PM, said:

You should of Used a 1X2 Clear Smooth Brick for the Hanger Shields....
Anyway, Nice! I Love the Chopped in Half Seppy Logo at the Back!
3.8/5

Thanks Lord Starkiller, my only concern with the 1x2 Clear smooth Brick is that it would be a bit to big for the hanger, and its not blue to match the deflector shields. But anyway, your feedback is appreciated!  :grin:

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Posted 25 February 2011 - 06:22 PM

*Fixed

Also, It Wont be to big, as the two 1X1 Studs Combined are 1X2 (or 2X1)
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#10 Professor Trelawney

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Posted 25 February 2011 - 10:01 PM

View PostLord Starkiller, on 25 February 2011 - 06:22 PM, said:

*Fixed

Also, It Wont be to big, as the two 1X1 Studs Combined are 1X2 (or 2X1)

Oh,  :laugh: I thought you meant a Clear brick, because If i had used that the hanger area might of been too big. Thank's for your feedback!  :sweet:

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Posted 26 February 2011 - 12:57 AM

View PostDobbyClone, on 25 February 2011 - 03:41 PM, said:

It's the same ship class as the Invisible Hand, This one is non-Neimodian though, while the one grievous flew was.  :classic:

I know the Invisible Hand was a Providence carrier, but what's this about Neimoidian and non-Neimoidian?

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Posted 26 February 2011 - 11:58 AM

View Postfallenangel309, on 26 February 2011 - 12:57 AM, said:

I know the Invisible Hand was a Providence carrier, but what's this about Neimoidian and non-Neimoidian?

Ones Built by or for Neimoidians, and not Neimoidians i Guess
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Posted 26 February 2011 - 12:08 PM

Looks good. Can't say I recognise the ship, though.
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Posted 26 February 2011 - 10:13 PM

Looks pretty good!  Nice use of those stickers too. :thumbup:
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Posted 26 February 2011 - 11:51 PM

Hello!

A nice version for the "Invisible Hand". :classic: I'd like to recommend putting the top front 4x6 wedge one stud before the underside to create a little overhang as for the original. Furthermore, I'd simply use the Inverted 75° 2x1x3 slope for the bottom fin. This way you can get of the asymmetric and black stud inversion. :classic:

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Posted 26 February 2011 - 11:58 PM

View Poststarwarsfanatic, on 26 February 2011 - 12:08 PM, said:

Looks good. Can't say I recognise the ship, though.

Thanks Starwarsfanatic, its only a small first version I created, and as i said before in my first post, its not suppose to look like Trench's ship, only a normal Providence-Class.

View PostMasked Builder, on 26 February 2011 - 10:13 PM, said:

Looks pretty good!  Nice use of those stickers too. :thumbup:

Thank you Masked Builder! your comments are always appreciated  :sweet:

View PostLegostein, on 26 February 2011 - 11:51 PM, said:

Hello!

A nice version for the "Invisible Hand". :classic: I'd like to recommend putting the top front 4x6 wedge one stud before the underside to create a little overhang as for the original. Furthermore, I'd simply use the Inverted 75° 2x1x3 slope for the bottom fin. This way you can get of the asymmetric and black stud inversion. :classic:

Cheers,

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Thank you Christopher! I have an inverted 75° 2x1x3 slope but it was bigger than the top slope for the spire. so I had to use that black brick to support the smaller one, I will use that new slope for my version 2 though, thank you for your comments, they will always be appreciated!  :classic:

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Posted 27 February 2011 - 09:56 AM

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Its a nice try, but where's the beak and distinct bird-face design?
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#18 Professor Trelawney

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Posted 27 February 2011 - 10:37 AM

View PostBeetlejuice, on 27 February 2011 - 09:56 AM, said:

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Its a nice try, but where's the beak and distinct bird-face design?

It's not suppose to look like trench's ship, as I put in my first post. I only used that image as a reference for the position it is in.
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Posted 27 February 2011 - 02:21 PM

View Postfallenangel309, on 26 February 2011 - 12:57 AM, said:

I know the Invisible Hand was a Providence carrier, but what's this about Neimoidian and non-Neimoidian?
The one in RotS was meant for Gunray himself, but because the Seps needed it in the invasion, grievous took it over. Neimodian officers were assigned to the bridge. I'm guessing thats why the RotS one is black. This one is a warship.
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Posted 28 February 2011 - 05:44 PM

Yes, It is quite small but it is very cool as well!  :classic: Thank you from the pics!  :classic:

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Posted 17 March 2011 - 12:19 AM

I love it!  I seriously thought about doing a game of Star Wars Miniatures Space Battles using mini-sets like this.  Only I'm not clever enough to actually make them all.  I applaud you!



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