The Queen's Catacombs
Posted 09 January 2011 - 09:16 PM
Deep under the bloody sands of Geonosis
in the Queen's catacombs,
lies the army of the dead in stasis!
As the Geonosians above began to lose,
and their mighty hives fell,
it made their leaders choose.
And as the advancing clones will soon find now
that everything above,
will not be quite as bad as what's below.
LT. TK-1456 (Spark): Unit moving forward commander! Jet, take point! Everyone bucket lights on!
TK-1458 (Jet): Sir I'm detecting movement up ahead! I'll check it out!
LT. Spark: Spots and Darman! Prepare to cover Jet, if there is indication of hostiles I want a Theta B-50 maneuver on my order.
TK-1449 (Spots): But if we're surrounded by the bugs would'nt it be--
LT. Spark: Spots, that is an order!
TK-1561 (Darman): Sir is it just me or has it seemed like we've been being watched the deeper we go?
Spots: Yeah i've felt it too. It's very strange.
Darman: Maybe the Bugs are'nt the only thing down here?
LT. Spark: Okay quit the chatter you two. We need to reconnect with Kenobi's unit, I just heard they may have run into hard contact!
LT. Spark: Not sure, the comm channels are all too frantic. There's some fighting going un-----
Jet: AHHHH-*Crackle*- Skrrreeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Darman: That was definantly Jet's comm! Reading........reading........ just a 'klick down this side tunnel.
LT. Spark: Alright men, change of plans. Battle stance Beta alpha Skywalker! I'll cover your backs in case we get outflanked.
Spots: 20 meters........16 meters,
LT Spark: what was that?
Darman: Oh great, the lights have shut off! let me start up emergency power.
Darman: Hol--- *Blaster shots* They won't stay down!
Spots: My Le-----*Crackle* fal-- *more blaster shots*
LT. Spark: Spots!? Darman!? Respond! Anyone? Respond, that's an order!
LT. Spark: Spots?
Noises: Greeeeew! kit-kit-kita!
LT. Spark: Squad 238, this is Lieutenant TK-1456 requesting assistance! My squad is either K.I.A or missing and i'm under assault by something.
LT. Spark: What the--
Noises: Krrrrew! Kit-kit-kita!
LT. Spark: Why won't you just go down!?
*Blaster shots and a scream*
*Note: This is supposed to be a squad in the catacombs of Queen Karina during the CW episode "Legacy of Terror"*
Posted 09 January 2011 - 09:23 PM
...But then there was that last pic
Edited by KingDom, 09 January 2011 - 09:23 PM.
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2016 so far
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Posted 09 January 2011 - 09:26 PM
Will we see the Queen in later pics?
Posted 09 January 2011 - 09:30 PM
I acknowledge that Text Based Stories are not Scary but this was superbly Written and one of my Most Enjoyed Stories reading so while I wasn't scared I give you 4 Marks for Great Writing.
Though maybe if you had a bit where the Geonosians threw that ARF Against the Wall you might have got another Few Marks from me
Posted 09 January 2011 - 09:45 PM
Posted 10 January 2011 - 04:55 AM
Posted 10 January 2011 - 12:04 PM
May the horror be with you !
Posted 10 January 2011 - 01:37 PM
Posted 10 January 2011 - 02:35 PM
This is quite good, a little more photos though would be better. (I voted 6 because I am hard to creep out )
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