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#1 Mr Man

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Posted 21 November 2010 - 02:46 PM

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On the distant planet of Felucia Jedi Bob (RGS 7163) meets his end at the hands of Commander Dorn of the 327th Star Corps, and his Captain Morn and troopers AF-71 and LS-63.
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'Commander Dorn execute order 66'
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'Captain Morn Kill Him'
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Posted 21 November 2010 - 02:59 PM

Ahhh!  My eyes... pictures...so...big... computer....can't...process them...Will ignore...user... until... he... reads posting rules  :thumbdown:

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Posted 21 November 2010 - 03:11 PM

I'd have to agree with def,  your picturesque definitely need a bit of a resize.

As for the MOC, its ok, but it leaves alot to be desired.   I'm usually not a fan of photoshopped backdrops but it actually helps in this case.  There is so little to the MOC, the background helps to hid that fact.

#4 Mr Man

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Posted 21 November 2010 - 03:32 PM

Hopefully sorted the sizes. the MOC is sparse because it was built with the last of the loose bricks I had lying around from another MOC.
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Posted 21 November 2010 - 07:57 PM

I can see you had a limited selection of bricks available. The backdrop does really help, I guess the one part I like is the speeder the Jedi is riding, and the BARC is pretty nice, considering you apparently used only pieces from the Clone BP.

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Posted 21 November 2010 - 08:20 PM

Looks great for the limited parts! :thumbup:
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Posted 22 November 2010 - 12:43 AM

That's a mighty big speeder that clone's got... still, I would have to agree that you've made the best of a limited inventory. The use of the old megaphone blasters are also nice.

You've got a 91st trooper overhead and... a clone with yellow arms. Which corps does he belong to?

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Posted 22 November 2010 - 01:33 AM

Yeah, Id have to agree with what the others say, the backdrop helps, and you do need more detail in this.
A promising start though!

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Posted 22 November 2010 - 02:19 AM

Hello Mr Man,

I must say that's a pretty decent MOC considering our assumption that you have limited parts. I can see what you're driving at and the message is well-conveyed enough. If you have the right amount of parts, you might consider improving your speeder and putting additional Felucia plant-life. That's a already good start and I really like the photo-editing you did in the last pic. Pls. do take our criticisms constructively and hope we'll see improved MOCs from you in the future.

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Posted 22 November 2010 - 03:12 AM

View Postfallenangel327, on 22 November 2010 - 12:43 AM, said:

You've got a 91st trooper overhead and... a clone with yellow arms. Which corps does he belong to?
I'm guessing he ran out of Star Corps troopers.

#11 Mr Man

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Posted 22 November 2010 - 01:26 PM

Yes I did run out of them, They are engaged at another conflict somewhere else.
I am working on some felucian plant life and a proper tower for the clones.
Thanks for the C&C. when the next of my big MOC's breaks I will have enough pieces to build a proper diorama.
BTW the other MOC's are big space ones.
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Posted 23 November 2010 - 07:52 AM

View PostMr Man, on 22 November 2010 - 01:26 PM, said:

Yes I did run out of them, They are engaged at another conflict somewhere else.
I am working on some felucian plant life and a proper tower for the clones.
Thanks for the C&C. when the next of my big MOC's breaks I will have enough pieces to build a proper diorama.
BTW the other MOC's are big space ones.

These other mocs sound good, you should post them some time. :sweet:

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#13 Mr Man

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Posted 23 November 2010 - 03:18 PM

Thanks CommanderFox I might  post them at some point, they would have to be on the si-fi forum though. The big one ,a moon base, is on display somewhere so I would have to wait for that to come back first.
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Posted 23 November 2010 - 04:40 PM

The foating bridge is a little strange...




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