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#1 Scorpio

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Posted 16 November 2010 - 04:25 AM

I have spent the last two weeks sorting and organizing my Lego room so I treated myself to a build this weekend. Without further ado I present my renovated downtown factory. As always comments, questions and criticism are welcome. I can already tell you off the bat that I personally do not like the gray arches and I am going to change them but I didn't feel like taking the whole thing apart so soon. Thanks for looking.

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#2 prateek

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Posted 16 November 2010 - 04:35 AM

Wow! Very realistic! It looks like an old factory. I love all the small details. One thing I'd change is that awkward grey portion in front of the garage. :classic: :thumbup:

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Posted 16 November 2010 - 04:47 AM

Excellent old school factory complete with water tower and modern air extraction system :thumbup: ....though it might need a little adjustment by the looks of it. :wink:
Great piece of Lego building 'DHCP1121' and keep on MOCing ! :sweet:

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Posted 16 November 2010 - 04:51 AM

View Postprateek, on 16 November 2010 - 04:35 AM, said:

One thing I'd change is that awkward grey portion in front of the garage.

I probably should have taken a better pic of that. The gray thing is a loading dock. But I agree, I could work on making that look better. I couldn't find my Lego truck to back up into it.

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Posted 16 November 2010 - 05:03 AM

Okay, now I understand. I was thinking of a ramp, but now that you reminded me of a loading dock, it looks fine to me :thumbup:

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Posted 16 November 2010 - 05:10 AM

This looks veru realistic and modern. Great work. :sweet:

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Posted 16 November 2010 - 06:57 PM

This factory looks very accurate and realistic. :thumbup:
Well done.  :classic:

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Posted 17 November 2010 - 02:55 AM

Very nicely done DHCP1121! I agree the design is very realistic to real factories. The various elements - smoke chimneys, water tank, exhaust vent - are all very well done. Great job overall! :thumbup: Any plans of putting workers, a forklift, and box/cargo/stuff in there? :classic:

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Posted 17 November 2010 - 07:11 AM

Noce job. What I ilked most about it is that it really gives the impression that it works: it is "dirty" and old.
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Posted 18 November 2010 - 03:40 AM

View PostDHCP1121, on 16 November 2010 - 04:51 AM, said:

I probably should have taken a better pic of that. The gray thing is a loading dock. But I agree, I could work on making that look better. I couldn't find my Lego truck to back up into it.
No need, IMO - real loading docks on factories like this are just blocks of unfinished concrete anyway! I suppose you could add yellow safety rails if you really want to tweak it a bit.



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